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Old 2006-11-03, 02:03 PM   #76
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Ok people..after 5h of work...it's finally done! My 11 template is here

http://www.justmakeitsexy.com/free/011/

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Looks great!
I dont see any problems here
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Old 2006-11-07, 07:06 PM   #77
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ok people...new one

http://www.justmakeitsexy.com/free/barb01/index.html

so...what do you think? Is there something wrong...thanks
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Old 2006-11-08, 03:58 AM   #78
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Old 2006-11-08, 05:02 AM   #79
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I think I've seen this set submited to me few times already so you may have troubles with getting listed but other than that site itself looks great
Oh, and as far as I know sexysites.com is not taking any submits at the moment
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Old 2006-11-08, 10:35 AM   #80
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I know you're struggling with english, but some of the language on that site is pretty bad.

"Fill full pleasure", "Take your MILF now and start to enjoy in life"...

Do you perhaps have an english speaking friend who could preview your text prior to submission?
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Old 2006-11-08, 11:30 AM   #81
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That 500x500 FPA looks mighty big to me...

On http://www.justmakeitsexy.com/free/011/ two of the recips are fucked up - smilingpussy ("Daily updates" white on white) and freesitexxx ("Free XXX Porn" hardly shows)
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Old 2006-11-09, 04:56 PM   #82
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I know you're struggling with english, but some of the language on that site is pretty bad.

"Fill full pleasure", "Take your MILF now and start to enjoy in life"...

Do you perhaps have an english speaking friend who could preview your text prior to submission?
Seem to see that more and more lately.

Or I am getting all the bathroom gangs.

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Old 2006-11-10, 12:25 PM   #83
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Ok...I was fix that problem...thanks guys Is there any problems on this one?

http://www.justmakeitsexy.com/free/debby01/index.html

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Old 2006-11-10, 02:18 PM   #84
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Ok...I was fix that problem...thanks guys Is there any problems on this one?

http://www.justmakeitsexy.com/free/debby01/index.html

Thanks
The issues that would cause me to decline the site...

This text from your entry and main pages..."Take your FREE tour now and download your FULL movie!" makes it seem that there's a FREE FULL movie on the tour

The big banner on the main page has text stating...
"CLICK HERE FOR FREE MOVIE TRAILERS", yet I couldn't find any free video clips on the tour. Hate it when paysites use deceptive text on their promo materials

The only technical issue I saw with the site is your images are out of sequence and you don't have nearly enough anal content for the site to go in the anal category
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Old 2006-11-10, 04:44 PM   #85
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Ok...MrYum, thanks for all that infos but I can't change that sponsor banner...it's text which everybody use...free this, free that...I can't see problem there And about that pictures...I will change that picture set, just tell me, how many pictures of some content I need to have in my gallery to make that gallery properly...thank you, I really appreciate your replays
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Old 2006-11-10, 05:02 PM   #86
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Ok...MrYum, thanks for all that infos but I can't change that sponsor banner...it's text which everybody use...free this, free that...I can't see problem there And about that pictures...I will change that picture set, just tell me, how many pictures of some content I need to have in my gallery to make that gallery properly...thank you, I really appreciate your replays
The only thing you can change about the sponsor banner is to use a different banner that doesn't contain deceptive text

The fact that everyone uses it really isn't relevant as it comes down the the reviewer looking at your site. Perhaps I'm more 'anal' about deceptive text on banners than some, but I've got a hunch I'm not alone.

The amount of content you have is fine...it's the order of the pics in your galleries that needs correcting. The pics should flow in sequence with the action taking place. Meaning the chick shouldn't be naked in one pic and dressed in the next. Just take a look at your set of pics and make sure the action is flowing correctly
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Old 2006-11-10, 06:49 PM   #87
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Is it better now

http://www.justmakeitsexy.com/free/debby01/index.html
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Old 2006-11-10, 08:56 PM   #88
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Actually...no

You still have deceptive banners and text.

And your pics are still out of sequence. Look at the second gallery...they're fucking...she's sucking his cock...they're fucking...she's sucking his cock...etc..

Try to keep the action in proper sequence.

Also, I mis-spoke in my last post...was in a hurry. For an anal site, there's really not enough anal content in those pics. Only about half the pics in the second gallery are anal. Try to at least get the niche action started in the first gallery.
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Old 2006-11-14, 06:46 PM   #89
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And what about this one?

http://www.justmakeitsexy.com/free/she01/index.html
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Old 2006-11-21, 11:09 AM   #90
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What about this one people...can I submit it?

http://www.justmakeitsexy.com/free/sf01/index.html

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Old 2006-11-21, 11:33 AM   #91
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Looks good to me.

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What about this one people...can I submit it?

http://www.justmakeitsexy.com/free/sf01/index.html

Thanks
I decline all sites that have more than one 'Enter' link on index page - other than that site looks good.

BTW. you dont need to ask every time you build anything
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Old 2006-11-23, 10:58 AM   #92
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Any problems here?

http://www.justmakeitsexy.com/free/hca01/index.html
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Old 2006-11-29, 08:24 PM   #93
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Can i submit this free site with this PHP in main page?

http://www.justmakeitsexy.com/free/htn01/index.html

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