Are these sites looking good enough for you..

[EthnicLover]

I'm not a FS master like most of you guys. Horny Dude has helped me alot trying to get some traffic to my paysites with FS submissions. I sub'ed these recently and I just wanted to know what you guys think. If I have sub'ed them to you and you declined them then please let me know what I need to fix.

http://socalsweetness.com/free_ebony...lut1/index.htm

http://socalsweetness.com/free_latin...007/index.html

Thanks guys,

[natalie]

Hi EthnicLover
Nice tidy sites you have there!
Of cos its would depend on the ll but a few things I could pick out are:
-Many ll's don't allow hardcore on the warning page, this includes hard cocks.
-Your page title should be the same as the title you submit
-You have enter here on a banner on the warning page which will get u rejected at many ll's
-I am not positive but theres a chance some ll want pics that are over 600px now

Except for the hardcore and enter on banners (both on warning page) I would definately list your sites. Very well done I reckon.

[EthnicLover]

Thanks for the tips....so my banner on the index page needs to not have 'enter here' on it? Hmmmm that seems funny. Guess I will have to get my designer on getting some new ones with 'enter here' removed and no hardcore images. I went with the pic size from my TGP galleries, is it different on LL?

[Horny Dude]

EthnicLover.....haha...Jason is good people! Hit me up on ICQ man I got more templates for you! We hitting In & Out for dinner tonight?

I would list your sites even with that one with that big black girl. She is not fat she is Phat!! j/k

[swedguy]

I think they're nice. I'd list them

[dareutwo]

I declined them both -


Those templates look just too much like sponsor galleries.
(previously not knowing HD is helping you - I'd say you can copy and paste very well)

Make a bunch of your Own templates.
(and if HD can't help you with that - well, find new friends )
Hint - there is tons of tips on this board!

Make them Yours, not everyone elses who copy/paste that I decline every day.

Welcome to GG&Jims btw

[Fido]

This is yours? I reviewed your site right now and I accepted it, but there is some problem with your server. I can not access it from my computer, it gives me 403 error. Looks like some IP range ban...

[Rocco]

I find them ok - also the templates are ok as long as you will not overuse them; if I will get every day one site submitted using always the same template I will also start declining it...

but I'm sure you are able to design some new templates

[Jel]

Aside from the 'enter' on banner I'd list those. Some places accept hardcore on the warning page, some don't. But 99.9% reject for the use of the word enter anywhere on the warning page except for the link to the mainpage, including banners.
As has been said, create a new template for the next 30 sites you build, you'll then have a different one to use every day.

[Lemmy]

Looks fine to me. I'd be happy to list them.

[spacemanspiff]

They look fine to me. I'd list em.

[EthnicLover]

Originally Posted by dareutwo

I declined them both -


Those templates look just too much like sponsor galleries.
(previously not knowing HD is helping you - I'd say you can copy and paste very well)

Make a bunch of your Own templates.
(and if HD can't help you with that - well, find new friends )
Hint - there is tons of tips on this board!

Make them Yours, not everyone elses who copy/paste that I decline every day.

Welcome to GG&Jims btw

YIKES!!

HD is cool and mainly helped me get some freesites together via some templates. My design skillz are lacking. My specialty is one thing getting girls and getting them naked for photo shoots.

I think my content will speak for itself, I know alot of you get submissions for webmasters using over used content so if I submit a site that yeah might use a template but the content is something many surfers have never seen then I'm sure a majority of you will approve it. But heh if you want to keep on packing your list with overused sponsor content then more power to you.

Thanks for everyones help!

[dareutwo]

EthnicLover -
I don't believe I made myself real clear, my apologies.
From my end... I simply see a link in for review from someone new.
From experience;
I have about a 5% chance of going to pop hell.
I have about a 2% of getting some sort of virus (it gets blocked, but nonetheless)
About 30% chance of it being autosubmitted. (then need to blacklist)
20% don't have the correct recip.
30% can't seem to read rules.

So yeah it's a small window, I'm a bit picky.

However, you are correct, content weighs better than layouts.
And knowing who the heck you are weighs even more.
Now I know who you are, your background, and most importantly, how to reach you.

I do send out a lot of fix this/fixthat emails.

If you have any further questions feel free to email me - I'm easy to find.

[EthnicLover]

I totally understand from a reviewers point of view, I did it for 3 years with a TGP I owned and it was hard...I think it was more like 50% who didn't read the rules.

Knowing this I always hand submit, use the correct recip(I only really submit black or Latina sites/galleries) and I don't screw around. Word of mouth in this biz is king and when a reviewer knows you and what the work you submit then you get listed.

thanks daretwo for the comments I hope my sites get listed in the future!

[pornhitzman]

I would list those sites, submit!

[Mcbethar]

Nice sites EthnicLover. If you build your next sites adjusting them a bit more to the basic rules (as natalie said before) I would also list them.

[Thumbler]

Originally Posted by dareutwo

From my end... I simply see a link in for review from someone new.
From experience;
I have about a 5% chance of going to pop hell.
I have about a 2% of getting some sort of virus (it gets blocked, but nonetheless)
About 30% chance of it being autosubmitted. (then need to blacklist)
20% don't have the correct recip.
30% can't seem to read rules.

Wow! That's 87% who won't make it - leaving 13% or around 1 in 8 who will.
I never realised there were so many people around who couldn't follow the basic requirements to get listed.

[Mishi]

Originally Posted by Thumbler

Wow! That's 87% who won't make it - leaving 13% or around 1 in 8 who will.
I never realised there were so many people around who couldn't follow the basic requirements to get listed.

Oh, you would be AMAZED...