Hello...Please allow me to introduce myself

[Hotmodeltease]

Hello

MY name is Mark and I am from Canada.

I have been lurking on this and other boards for three weeks now. First let me say this was the first board I landed on and started to
soak in information and spend many, many hours going through the search files.

So after three weeks of research and learning a little from the ground up, I think I'm ready to submit my first free site.

I have chosen this board to use as a sounding board 'cause I like you all so much. I have noticed most of you are very helpful.

I made my first html page 2 weeks ago, learning a little html, css
php and all about apache servers and crontabs (groan).

So if you don't mind I will try to post my first free site here, for your suggestions so that I can gain from your experience and wisdom!

Am I ready to submit Yet? My First Free Site

I look forward to your assistance in helping me polish up my skills!

[Star Man]

Hi Hotmodeltease.I must say that is one HELL of a first shot! It's so clean I could eat off it.Theres just a few minor details where you could run into trouble:


1.Penisbot's recip is missing the required 'porn' ALT tag and will most likely be rejected.

2.Your pics fail to meet the 24 picture minimum required by LOR.

3.Their also too small at 427x640 =1067 and fail to meet the 1200 rule..That would get you rejected.Try resizing the original sized pics again at around 740x495 or so.

4.The content is weak.Even though she's a hot looking broad,she doesn't get naked until gallery 2 and you could get rejected because it lacks the required amount of nudity to justify a porn site.

5.Your recips and some of your links open up on a new page and that would get you rejected.Always make sure that everything opens up on the same page.In other words,never use '_blank' on your links or banners.


One other minor detail that won't get you rejected but you might want to take into consideration - in less than 4 day's from now,your site will seem out of date and in 4 months from now a Christmas porn site is just downright depressing.You may just want to skip it and wait till next year.Thats just my personal opinion.

Other then that I like your clean building style.If this is your first site,I'd like to see how your sites look a year from now

[Mateusz]

Your site looks pretty good

As Star Man said all sponsor & recip links need to open in the same window. Also, if there are two links in somone's recip table I'd suggest to copy both links.
IMO name of the site shouldn't be longer than 25 characters, approx 30; the name itself should sound logical

And welcome to the board

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Originally Posted by Star Man

4.The content is weak.Even though she's a hot looking broad,she doesn't get naked until gallery 2 and you could get rejected because it lacks the required amount of nudity to justify a porn site.

If you submited your site to lingerie or uniform category I think it would be listed, however if you would like to get listed in babes category make sure we can see at least some boobies in couple of photos.

I remember babes categories were also called softcore so it would get listed couple of years ago, but we are going more and more hardcore everyday so I think you need to show off more also in this category

[pc]

Welcome on Board Hotmodeltease.
Very nice fs for a first time.What Star Man and Mateusz said pretty much sums it up.
Just start submitting and very fast after few weeks you will know much more about fs structure and how certain LL treat you.

Just on a side - write some text on your hub and place some links to sponsors promoting your niche.

Good Luck.

[sue-fl]

Pleased to meet you Hope you guess my name
But what's puzzling you Is the nature of my game

Sorry but your title has me singing that song now. I will say though it's a nice freesite

[Hotmodeltease]

Good Morning

Thank you guys for the "heads up" on small but very important details.

As far as my fs is concerned, the technical stuff I can easily change.
My sponsor only has free content with 18 pics each set, good for tgp but not for fs. I could use two sets of the same girl.
I should have checked what and how much the sponsor offers before I started. Star Man...yor info about the site being short term is well taken. I read enough articles on how fs sites can work for
years and should always consider the long term aspect before
building!

CONTENT: This has me a little confused.
Yes the material from this sponsor is considered softcore, but I like the allure and anticipation of a well photographed strip show. I want to tie in my domain name "Hot Model Tease" to showing quality photography and hot babes being "coy" or suggestive. I hope that my ad copy skills will improve enough as to lure the surfer further into the sponsors tour page.

The lingerie, uniform, nylon thing is a smart idea for this kind of stuff and I will do more research on this. I don't want to be another "cumshot on face" run of the mill poster guy!

Thanks again for your help, and I guess its back to the drawing board for me!

Mark
P.S. I love the Stones

[MeatPounder]

a lil thing, but your page title is mispelled (Christmas)
<title>Hot Model Tease Cristmas Nymph</title>

[japamor]

Hi Hotmodeltease
That's a really good first site. I'm sure most LL's would list it.
I'd just add one point that banners without text are 'invisible' to the surfer. You've got room above and below each banner to hit the surfer with a sales pitch.

[Pagan]

Nice first site!!!

These guys have made some really good, constructive comments. The alt tag is vital, and you really should use it with every image. You can use a tag line, like "InFocusGals Mean Real Teens, Real Action, Real Orgasms" so that people who have to wait for images to load have something to entertain themselves with. Yeah, there are other reasons but do they really matter?

With the content, your sponsor really does have quite a bit (I use them too). You will easily find great sets that you can cull out of the 18s. Do 2 sets of 12 and you will fit most of the LLs out there. If you really feel wild, do 2 15s. Persian Kitty really only takes 30 pic sites. I know those are placeholders.

Also, learn to add titles to all of your links. That's what you see when your mouse crosses over the link. A little entertainment value, more food for search engines, etc. These are really minor things that come along with HTML. Even when I do a gallery link, it is <a title="Hot Model Tease Gallery 1" href="gallery1.html"> so that the surfer gets a little thrill.

Pretty site... you have a nice clean style. I would certainly list you.

[NY Jester]

Welcome to the board, nice looking site..just one thing to keep in mind is to set up your directories so that you can have endless sites on the same domain name domain.com/fs1/ domain.com/fs2/ domain.com/fs3/ etc

[Goldie]

Hi Babe!

[p3rlphr33k]

Sorry but your title has me singing that song now.

Same here!

As for the site, Seems most everything was covered. The only recommendation I can make is the 2257 link. It can be a traffic leak. instead of linking just put a URL instead (unlinked) to the 2257 page.

excellent work!

[Hotmodeltease]

Hotmodeltease back again.
I last checked in with my first freesite for review and got a lot of feedback. I have since made all mentioned corrections, I think?

The help this board gave me, directly and researching the message board's previous postings has helped me more than you can imagine for a complete newbie like myself.

The issue of Softcore and content is where I have a little problem, I have researched the "erotic" "stockings" "tease" gendre and WOW!,
these guys are good.

But that is another day,..

Here was my first freesite

Same template with add ons and corrections new first freesite

Sooooo....I have been at this for 30 days since I first started
and am ready to post!
if you say its O.K. of course

Thanks again for your heap of help.

[Star Man]

Looks good to me!

[NY Jester]

Site looks clean and crisp. The only thing Id suggest is to use the maximum allotted links out on both your index and main pages. You can have up to 3..it appears you're only utilizing 1 on each? That's prime "real estate" and you'd be surprised at how many clicks you're leaving out there.
For instance, you have testimonial from Rabbit's on the main page - why not sign up for their affiliate program and link direct to the full review? And on the index page, the space under the "ENTER" is one of the highest (for me) clicked areas - make good use of it.