please review my free site and gallery

mniki · 2005-05-15, 10:12 AM

Hi

For 2 months now I have been learning to make galleries and free sites, now I have tried to make free site and 2 galleries using the same pics and design.
Please review It and tell me If there Is anything wrong or should I change anything.

free site:
http://www.naturalpussy.net/tgp/kaliyah/index.html

galleries:
http://www.naturalpussy.net/tgp/kali...pussy_gal1.htm

http://www.naturalpussy.net/tgp/kali...pussy_gal2.htm

Thx in advance for help and usefull suggestions.

swedguy · 2005-05-15, 10:50 AM

Hi Mniki,

I think they're nice looking and should probably get listed at many places.

You should add a title on the index page though, like "Hairy Kaliyah" or what the site is called.
You also have a typo on the gallery pages "VIST" should be "VISIT".
One thing that looked kinda odd was the 1st picture in gallery 2. Not sure if gallery 2 continued from gallery 1 and the 1st picture was just a random pic or gallery 2 was a whole new set.

Good luck

tradr_09 · 2005-05-15, 11:48 AM

Yeah I noticed that spelling mistake too. But apart from that it all looks ok, fast loading page, right number of pics, so there won't be any problems submitting.

Best of luck

mniki · 2005-05-15, 12:11 PM

Will fix mistakes , and about that odd pic, gallery one and two are 2 different pic sets,

Certifiedbitch · 2005-05-16, 04:53 AM

i think they all look good from your freesite to galleries.
just fix some of the spelling error and you're set.

ronnie · 2005-05-16, 08:53 AM

I think they look pretty good, like the colors and layout. Only thing, with the free site, is the pictue on the index/warning page, kinda graphic, might be a problem some places.

ronnie

mniki · 2005-05-16, 12:38 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ronnie

Only thing, with the free site, is the pictue on the index/warning page, kinda graphic, might be a problem some places.

ronnie

Can you explain a bit, I am not sure I understand

Count Zero · 2005-05-16, 06:55 PM

Mniki, I'm think, ronnie means that some reviewers may consider this picture as a hardcore on a warning page and not list site.

Nice site, I would list it

ronnie · 2005-05-16, 07:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Count Zero

Mniki, I'm think, ronnie means that some reviewers may consider this picture as a hardcore on a warning page and not list site.

Nice site, I would list it

Ya, thats what I was trying to say..

ronnie

mniki · 2005-05-17, 05:04 AM

Ok, thx

Presmar · 2005-05-18, 12:35 AM

I agree....looks pretty good to me...as Ronnie mention some would reject you for having that large pic on the warning page. It was the first thing that came to mind when I viewed them. Looks good there, but just to play it safe you could replace the warning page pic with a large banner instead.

mniki · 2005-05-18, 10:39 AM

will try to make a version with large banner instead pic

2005-05-15, 10:12 AM	#1
mniki Just because I don't care doesn't mean I don't understand! Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Yugoslavia Posts: 94	please review my free site and gallery Hi For 2 months now I have been learning to make galleries and free sites, now I have tried to make free site and 2 galleries using the same pics and design. Please review It and tell me If there Is anything wrong or should I change anything. free site: http://www.naturalpussy.net/tgp/kaliyah/index.html galleries: http://www.naturalpussy.net/tgp/kali...pussy_gal1.htm http://www.naturalpussy.net/tgp/kali...pussy_gal2.htm Thx in advance for help and usefull suggestions. __________________ http://www.pornhound.net

2005-05-15, 11:48 AM	#3
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2005-05-15, 12:11 PM	#4
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2005-05-16, 04:53 AM	#5
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2005-05-17, 05:04 AM	#10
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2005-05-15, 10:50 AM	#2
swedguy Vagabond Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 2,374	Hi Mniki, I think they're nice looking and should probably get listed at many places. You should add a title on the index page though, like "Hairy Kaliyah" or what the site is called. You also have a typo on the gallery pages "VIST" should be "VISIT". One thing that looked kinda odd was the 1st picture in gallery 2. Not sure if gallery 2 continued from gallery 1 and the 1st picture was just a random pic or gallery 2 was a whole new set. Good luck

2005-05-16, 08:53 AM	#6
ronnie Wheither you think you can or you think you can't, Your right. Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: midwest Posts: 2,274	I think they look pretty good, like the colors and layout. Only thing, with the free site, is the pictue on the index/warning page, kinda graphic, might be a problem some places. ronnie

2005-05-16, 06:55 PM	#8
Count Zero Registered User Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Russia, Irkutsk Posts: 33	Mniki, I'm think, ronnie means that some reviewers may consider this picture as a hardcore on a warning page and not list site. Nice site, I would list it

2005-05-18, 12:35 AM	#11
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2005-05-18, 10:39 AM	#12
mniki Just because I don't care doesn't mean I don't understand! Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Yugoslavia Posts: 94	will try to make a version with large banner instead pic __________________ http://www.pornhound.net