Help me to improve

[willsmit]

Hi Everyone!
I'd like to ask linklist owners their contribute to help me improve the quality of my free sites.

Here You are a couple links a recently built (they are recipless but I put recips on my pages when I submit)

http://www.pinkcenterfold.com/suckin...ing_babes.html

http://www.pinkcenterfold.com/dildo_...do_in_ass.html

http://www.pinkcenterfold.com/thai_w...hai_whore.html

http://www.pinkcenterfold.com/hot_le...an_action.html

Your help is precious for me, thanks in advance for taking the time to drop a reply

francesco
(willsmit)

[swedguy]

Hi Francesco,

You got some nice sites. Only issue I see is that your pics are huge, the ones I looked at were around 100kB. You might run into template issues at some LL's too.

The next thing I would do is to maximize your ads. You only have 1-2 on each page, you can have 3.
I think some of your ads are pretty bland and could be changed a bit. One thing that helped me when I ran out of juice, was to read: The Copywriter's Handbook after that I realized the big picture behind why my ads that worked, worked and what I should stay away from. It also gave me some insight into what more I can do. It's good when you get stuck on the same path

Good luck

[ynuahayt]

In regards to ads I think you should definitely get some more text on your main and gallery pages - both to tell your surfer why he should join the site but also put some keywords in there so you might get some SE traffic out of your sites in the future!

I would gladly list your sites as they are though

[Lemmy]

Except for the size on some of the pics I think your sites look good, nice and clean. I'd list them.

[Useless]

Let me ask you a question. Who is your host?

[willsmit]

Thank You a lot for posting yours suggestions!

I thought that keeping that size for images would have helped me to keep quality as well but from now on I'll remain under 100Kb.
As regard the ads I use two links per page in order to stay under the minimum requirement of 3 ads per page and fully comply with rules even thou I have to say that ctr is not very high. That's one of the things I have to improve as well.

Thanks for your attention Useless Warrior: my host is revsharehosting

[Surfn]

Great job I'd list them all

[plateman]

I'd list them also and your welcome to submitt them to my LL - see my sig..

[plateman]

Yeah I just checked your whois and it looks a little clouded and it may hinder you in getting listed at some LL - is your hosting pay or free or on someone else's sever ?? revcore 12 sounds a little strange.. but as a side note I seen some of your other sites on another LL I review part time and that LL owner had no problems in listing you..

[ClickBuster]

I'm not a LL owner but I'll give you a hint "Think Google"... keep your sites simple and try to "arrange" them - ie make them as readable and browseable as possible. Don't try to spam the pages with ads... Let the surfers choose if they want to click on your ads or not - they see them, you can be sure about this... If people like your site's content they will click on the ads for sure!

-- Andrew

[willsmit]

Thanks for yours great suggestions guys and for sure I'll add your linklists to my submit list if you like my sites

as regard the revcore12 I can explane: my hosting provider earns a commission for each sale I bring in using sponsors I signed up under them. For example I promote silvercash which paies $30 per trial, I only get $26 and the rest $4 goes directly to my hosting provider. It is paied hosting.

the revcore servers are reserved to webmasters that demonstrated to be legit and supported this hosting for a long time. They provide more speed then ordinary servers assigned to new revsharehosting webmasters/customers.

[plateman]

Man if your serious about making money in this biz, you need legit paid hosting - and I know you paying for it from sales, but most LL owners in there eyes consider that kind of hosting "free" and I see you gave a honest answer when asked... And almost everyone on this board will tell you the same.. Get your own paid hosting... And I can say your chances of getting listed are not very good with that kind of hosting..

[Danny]

Nice sites. Apart from the template feeling and hosting issues you shouldn't run into any problems.

I only checked the thai site:

- You could link that add text on index for more clicks, or one portion of it any way.

- Warning text is relly wierd, if anyone bothers.

- Add site name on each page, galleries included. I personally appriciate that since it gives a more consistent impression and also shows that you can go that extra 15 seconds in creating a site.

Minor thingy, but you said "help me improve"...

ONE fuzzy image... http://www.pinkcenterfold.com/thai_w...gallery/10.jpg
Gives me a headache
Then again, it's a very tiny, little, small, microscopic problem and shouldn't get you rejected.

Cheers! |viking|
Danny

[Useless]

Get paid hosting. I, and many others, view revareshare no differently than Kinghost or any other free hosting. This is business. If you want to be taken seriously, put your money where your mouth is.

[willsmit]

Thanks for addressing me the hosting problem guys, I suspected that it could be a problem for some of You. As regard the template feeling I'll try to be more original

Hey Danny, sorry for that fuzzy image...I didn't want to give a headache people visiting my gallery and reviewers