Need some copywriting help

[Fonz]

I'm in need of 5 quality voyeur paysite "reviews" like the one you can see here: http://www.adultmirror.com/voyeur.html

But they should be 1.5-2 times longer than the one you see there. As you can see in the example I suck at this

If you are interested please hit me up on ICQ or send me a PM and tell me what this is going to cost me

[Head Boy]

Here's a quicky I wrote over coffee that you can have. You're welcome to use it or bits of it if it's useful.

Don't you just hate those girls in short skirts that never show the best bits. Voyeur Gals catches those prick teasers when they don't expect it. Our cams get so close you can tell when they last changed their panties - that's if they are wearing them!

Voyeur Gals gives you a lot more than this. Have you watched a college girl testing her boobs before she goes out on a hot date, or a sexy cheerleader trimming her pussy hairs ready for a new cheer dance? We catch these girls in all their hidden moments from their bathroom preparations to their bedroom secrets. We've even got copies of the cam clips from their gyno checkups.

Click here to enter the secret world of Voyeur Gals.

[Fonz]

Thanx Head Boy

[Head Boy]

NP

I'd be interested to hear some comments as I don't think I'm completely in tune with porn surfers. Maybe I should start a copy discussion thread.