Both galleries are the same :(

aaaggg i need to sleep :(
sorry ill fix it right away

First , hello Greenie and everybody on this thread.
Have began to post freesites only for a few days now, so...

this freesite has been rejected on link-o-rama
http://www.tabooteens.net/cutie-litt...ude/index.html

the reason is : Poor Grammar or Spelling Errors

English is not my native language but i really try to do my best. So to improve the quality of my next freesites, could you please tell me where are exactly the things i should change.

Many thanks for your help

"cutie little teen fucked" should prolly be either "A cutie. Little teen gets fucked .." or "a cute little teen gets fucked".

"SHe wants to try sucking her first cock, because she is totally addicted to cocks in her mouth." Not sure anything is wrong with it, but it just doent make much sense.

"If you are looking for more teens like Jackie, sucking cocks and riding a big fat dick, then you are looking for the hottest site around!
Join now & see our teen pussies hi-def movies!"

If you are looking for teens like Jessica that like sucking cock and riding fat dick, then you are looking for teenage whores. The hottest site around!
Join now to see teen pussy in hi def movies.

"Then check them out below, but if you are really ready for more then you need to join now and see hot eighteen ladies getting their pussies fucked and more!"

Then check them out below. But, if you are really ready for more, you need to join now to see hot eighteen year old ladies getting their pussies fucked and more.

"Check them out because those actions you will access to are really hot and you will love our DVD quality movies!"

Check them out, because the action you will be able to access is really hot and you'll love our dvd quality movies.

Just a few of the things i noticed. Just minor things that make a big difference in how it translates. Nice looking site though. |thumb

You may want to change the title between pages too.

many thanks for all your explanations oldbrad ;)

Hi Everyone,

Greenguy, would you look at this site and tell me if there's anything a link list wouldn't like on it please? http://www.twink-cock.com

I've been doing this a long time, but not for the past couple of years, things change so much, I thought it'd be good to ask.

thanks in advance :)

I don't want to get in the habit of doing "pre-reviews" Just read the rules & if your site fits, submit it :)

Your submission:
Site Name: Honeys Wearing Stockings
Site URL: http://www.thefetishresource.com/FS/TFR100009/03/
Category: Pantyhose

Has been rejected and it will not be listed.

Reason:
Site Structure Violation

Your submission:
Site Name: Wet teenage pussy
Site URL: http://www.sexx24h.com/free//wet-tee...nage-pussysex/
Category: TeenSoloGirls

Has been rejected and it will not be listed.

Reason:
Poor Grammar or Spelling Errors

Being listed these days on linkorama is getting harder and harder, I get the rejections one by one for tens of different reasons.
Some of them don't need the discussion, but some - like being rejected for misleading or blind links (http://buttmobile.com/milf-internal/...ied/index.html) - I think should have an explanation.
Which one of the links out there is really misleading or blind?
The one saying "Join the Milf Internal for as few as 2.95$" or "Get the access to Milf Internal Here", because the surfer needs to click twice to see the "join window"? |huh

my gellary has been rejected
 

Sorry. My gallery has been rejected
 

this my gallery:
http://www.celebrity-video-post.com/...-biella-1.html

Gallery has been rejected. But I cannot understand the reason of refusal, please explain to me the reasons. |banghead| Thanks...

The enter & exit links are not centered/lined up with the rest of the page. There's also a couple of pics out of order on the 2nd gallery.

Let me check with the reviewer on this one. But, I can say that the category you submitted the site to is not the correct one.

I see a couple that are borderline, but let me check with the reviewer. But I can say that the site won't get listed as is anyway as it does not fit in the category nor does the title match the content.

Was the rejection reason "Poor Grammar or Spelling Errors"? Also, I looked at the Mr Skin Nude Star List & I don't see Anna Biella on there :(

I must have selected the wrong rejection reason it was for being submitted to the wrong category :( Should have been teen nudes.

Guile "Watch a sample video clip of her!" is the one of a few that were on the borderline also as Greenie mentioned there are other reasons too. Your sites are relly starting to look the same :( You need to build some new templates.

Thanks
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