Please Review my site
 

http://www.busty-amateurs2.com/free/...ion/index.html

Busty Amateurs Audra Mitchell

thanks
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The site looks good, only thing that might get You declined I think is the links on the 2257 page, many webmasters want 0 links on 2257 pages because they are not supposed to be another link to the tour. They see it as a 4th outgoing link on the free site when the page has links to the pay site.

Another problem is that my recips are missing ;)

Looks fine to me, I'd list it.

Looking great in my opinion!

You could copy their source code and make a page of your own and delete the outgoing links. And you can submit here

nice looking free site. and great breasts on that model.

Great feedback guys, will be hitting you all up to submit to you and also make the changes on my 2257 page too

Looks good - Get the 2257 link fixed and I'd list it too.

Tobbe can I get some partner account to your sites please

E-mail me at webmaster at busty-amateurs2.com so I can get started please.

Submitted a new template today, http://www.busty-amateurs2.com/free-...ell/index.html what you think?

You have 4 out links on the gallery pages. Limit is 3 at most places.

Other than that it's a nice site. :)

Looks good - listed it today -- thanks for the submit.

as posted in the other thread - need to get the paysite name off the title meta - and when you submit dont use the paysite name in the title or desc

That's why I didn't list it. Cut back to 3 outgoing links and re-submit here, and get a title....

OK, cut down to 3 links on the pages, and Linkster I will make those changes too, I cut it down to 3 words
http://www.busty-amateurs2.com/free-...ion/index.html

Not a reviewer here, but for what it's worth -

1. Try to not to link entire paragraphs. I think a structure of some intro text, then a shorter 1-2 lines link, is easier on the eyes and more likely to get your surfer looking at it and possibly clicking.

2. Not sure why you would give them 3 galleries, when 2 is enough. We need to cut down on all the free porn ;)

3. I would go with sales text that explains why the paysite is better than the freesite (i.e. movies, hi-res pics etc).

4. If you convert the recips to unified looking text-links, you should be able to put 16-20 recips per table easily. Will give you a nice streamlined look IMO.

Ah what the heck I'll bite...
I'd list it at www.smilingpussylinks.com

I'd list it also. |thumb

I have listed a couple of yours already but I wanted to mention something that may be stopping others.

In your keywords you use busty 10 times which "may or may not" be spammy. Their was a thread about this but I could not find it.

The other is that it seems like you use busty or busty amateurs in your title often. Lots of list alphabetize and rotate so it may do you better to be more creative with titles.

Just my opinion and hope it helps :)

I agree wit JustRobert - if you want to target a keyword, be captious with over-use. Where you place a keyword in the text of a document and how often it is repeated can help or hurt you.

Use other prime words for busty in the title and then somewhere in the text of the document, drop in one or two references to “busty”. Also try to use other words for breasts – attempt to use plurals as people search much more for plurals (especially since the best tits come in pairs). Add adjectives like large, huge, massive, big, soft, firm etc.. It doesn’t hurt to separate these from your targeted key words. “The big woman had huge breasts” – both huge and big can be searched on when looking for large knockers.

One example:
Title:
Dreaming Of Big Breasts
Description:
Busty BBW gets caught with her hand in the cookie jar.
Site Text:
I love my breasts! I often catch myself playing with my tits without even realizing what I’m doing. One day while relaxing on the train to work, my hand had slipped up under my tight blouse and was caressing my huge nipples. I had been looking at the busty women in one of my favorite BBW fashion magazines and had drifted off to sleep. When I awoke, I looked up to see a large busty woman watching me intently. She smiled then reached over and gently and touched the finger that was caressing my now-erect nipple. The tingling in my……

Possible keywords:
busty, busty women, big breasts, BBW,
Other prime words that may be used in a search with busty:
Breasts, tits, tight, huge, nipples, fashion, large, caressing, erect, nipple, tingling……

Taking all feedback in http://www.busty-amateurs2.com/free-...ion/index.html, working on it each day is definitely helping me, thanks guys

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I'd list it :)

Getting closer to a finished product http://www.busty-amateurs2.com/free-...ion/index.html
Will that recip table work, looks alot cleaner.

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One comment - for an increase in sales - make sure that anytime you use a banner ALWAYS have some linked text around it (under whatever...) - keep in mind that there is a percentage of surfers that have great blocking programs that will block out standard banner sizes - and keep the text to less than 8 words - if they have to squint to read - they wont read it

Other comment - Im not sure why you are putting so much content on those free sites - 30 pics max - two galleries works just fine - 24 is better unless you are submitting to the one or two places that require 30 - the more content - the less the surfer will notice the ads

Linkster, not sure why I put 3 galleries there either, will start cutting it down, I just always did 3 for some reason. Also will add some text around the banner. One question, should I always just send my links to the tour, or can I send to my join page too?

That site looks good. Linkster always has good advice:)

Yes you can send them to the join page, not sure why but I always sent them to the tour.

What are the chances these days of getting an account with Cleo or Danger Dave?

Looks good to me once you fix the problem other people have mentioned, Nice job

All fixed, and everything is going great these days with submitting thanks to everyone here for sure.

Send them PM's and see what happens.