Need your opinion on my new design..
 

Hi all, |waves|

I am working on a new design for one of my sites and would appriciate some feedback from you all. It's just a big picture right now - 450kb LOL - http://www.tanyaonweb.com/template2.jpg

I will take the text away and put it back when I build it for the SE. Will also do a some animated gifs on the join buttongs. I kind of like the first part, but I wonder if the second part is a bit to untidy!

And if you see some misspellings or messed up sentences I would also appriciate the heads up on that. Or any other advice you might have.

Kalle |bananna|

The over all setup looks good.

The only 2 things that stand out to me are the picture to the left where she is standing up I do not think that is a very good picture of her, from the looks of the others she has better ones to use there. (It’s just not a flattering pic of her IMHO)

I'm also not crazy on the color combination. It’s too "tame/low key"

But I also pay to have my sights designed, so what do I really know?|crazy|

But I do like the over all look!


|cheers|

Hi Torn! |waves|

Thank for you feedback. LOL - thought that standing up picture was a nice one. Only shows that people have different taste and that it is important to ask other people what they think also. Will see if I get some more feedback on that one. I have my mind on another picture also that might work.

Yeah, kind of got stuck with this colour from early of. Didn't know what I was doing (still don't |jester| ) so I might stay with it for a bit longer. Right now is more temting to finnish this design instead of doing the hole site. LOL- |rasta|

Thanks for letting me share you oppinion - |cheers|

well, anytime you want me to look at a naked gal, you let me know.... it's my duty to help those out as long as there is a naked gal to look at.|waves|

|bananna|

BTW, if this is your first time, you have done far better then I have on the few hundred ones I tried to do over the last 5 years.

I have now accepted the fact that I suck at design and it's much easier to pay others to do it.


|pcsucks|

It looks great Kalle (better than anything I've done) I agree with torn on the photo where she's standing, She's hot but that photo doesn't do it for me

Torn: LOL - I think that it is the 5th time I am redoing the design of this site. Learning something new every time!

Thanks for the feedback TijuanaPat! It seems like I got to do something about that picture |jester| Will see what I can mix up!

Thanks |cheers|

Hi Kalle, I have to agree about the pic on the left, sorry. lol Otherwise great work. It's a lot of text and a lot of surfers won't read most of it... but it's mainly there for the SE's... the surfers will find what they want by the pics and read what they want.

I noticed a few little things in the text ... like 'come and watch my photos' should probably be 'see my photos' or 'view' or 'check out' even. A few s' on the ends of words that they shouldn't be on like, 'shares' and 'hungers'....

And, a few mis-spelled words (probably typos) like feautering (featuring) and devided (divided).

I think you should leave most of them, except for maybe the mis-spelled words.... The site is done in first person, and with her being russian it seems more authentic to me and may have guys thinking about her accent. Not a bad thing imho.

Good luck with the site!

Hi Trev!

LOL - nobody likes that picture, except me! But that is great, because that was I was looking for. If the picture doesn't do it I got to find another one! |rasta|

Thanks for the great feedback on the text. My english is not so good and especially when I gotta do some dirty talk |jester|

Appriciate it!! |cheers|

Lets see if we can find the hottest one!

http://www.tanyaonweb.com/template3.jpg

http://www.tanyaonweb.com/template4.jpg

http://www.tanyaonweb.com/template5.jpg

http://www.tanyaonweb.com/template6.jpg

http://www.tanyaonweb.com/template7.jpg

http://www.tanyaonweb.com/template8.jpg

They are a bit roughly done, but I will fix it up when I have found the right onw. LOL - Just |violin| if I am getting difficult!

My favourite now is among the ones where she is wearing the suit. LOL - it's actually my suit and tie. We ran out of clothes for her..... |cheer|

http://www.tanyaonweb.com/template8.jpg
my fav

I agree with TPat, #8 is by far the better one.|headbang|

Hi TPat and Torn! |waves|

LOL - Yeah, I have to agree. It is a good one. Will go for that one I think.

Thanks again!! |bananna|

I like the suit and 8.... she has very pretty eyes and the big pic shows them off.... (but you already said you were going with that one)

I also thought 3 was nice.

Thanks Trev! Yeah, Kinda like the big eyes more and more ... LOL |rasta|

EIGHT

Good work, Kallie and good luck.

Thanks Chop Smith! Appriciate it!

Just a heads up on your English.

http://www.tanyaonweb.com/template2.jpg

"where I can meet other people that shares my interests of pleasure"
"where I can meet other people who share my interests in pleasure"

"come and watch my photos"
"come and see my photos"

"so many men hungers for"
"so many men hunger for"

"At these pictures you can really see"
"From these pictures you can really see"

"situations feautering"
"situations featuring"

"My videos are all in devided into clips"
"My videos are all divided into clips"

"hear me when I get my huge orgasms"
"hear me when I have my huge orgasms"

But now I think about it... it kinda adds to the Russian charm of it all by being imperfect English.

But.... м********й русский **************** **************************************** ****************р********ш ;)

Hi Urb!
Thanks for the heads up on the grammar. Yeah, that is the general feedback I have got on the misspellings. It kind of make it a bit more realistic russian site. LOL - I have no problem making that bad grammar and misspellings so no problem there. LOL |jester|

Thanks!
Kalle

В******** буд********т******** ****************ст********приимсв********м и м********й русский **************************************** п************************ т********к у****************жд****************т **************** испр********в************************т ************************.

Urbs Speaking in Code |jester|

******** **************** дум**************** испр********в****************т******** в********ши ********шибки в русск********м ************************к******** т********к к********к м********й русский **************** ********у********ш******** ****************м в********ш и в ********т********м ******** ув********р**************** |jester|

Hi all,

I have probably done something wrong with the website, but if you got the time I would appriciate if you could test it on your browser to see if it loads correctly. Tested it on a "test site" and it looked all screwed up, but in my explorer and mozilla it looks fine..... I am confused! |jester|

http://www.tanyatarasof.com/index12.html