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Marchello 2004-12-09 03:35 PM

Verify my site:)
 
Hello good peoples how are you,
well just build one freesite and i need little verify before i submit.
Ok this is the one

Tittle: Extreme fucking

Description: You wouldn't believe what some of these women are willing to do

URL : http://www.nastyplace.com/freec/

Recip: http://www.nastyplace.com/freec/

Category: Amateur

Thx for all tips,
Marchello

Cleo 2004-12-09 03:40 PM

That huge watermark going across the entire image isn't going to fly. :(

Marchello 2004-12-09 04:31 PM

Made change:
http://www.nastyplace.com/freec/cet/
small watermarks

josho 2004-12-09 10:47 PM

i'm not a linklist owner (yet) and this is just my opinion, but i have a few suggestions for your site and/or future sites.

1. i would say that your advertising text is too weak, especially so on the index (recip) page.

2. your site name and description are very vague and don't match the content. where is the "extreme fucking"? if i was a surfer and i clicked on "extreme fucking". i wouldn't expect to see a bunch of goofy guys dancing around naked and getting their dicks sucked by ugly bitches. (not trying to hate on your content, i am sure there are many people interested in this type of content. it’s just that i'm trying to make a point.)

your site name and description should be very descriptive of the content of your site. you want the surfer's mind to become locked into a fantasy world about the content on your freesite, so bad that they must have more. your advertising text should then exploit their fantasy as it seeminglys offers up exactly what the surfer desires.

hope this helps,

josho

SortLinks 2004-12-14 12:16 AM

No more than 3 add per page
1) Learn html (FrontPage is sux imo)
2) Learn english (or find friend)

Also I suggest to lock you domain (you are using godaddy.com) there is much bad said about godaddy

if you have more "hubs" I can trade with you and give you some hints 161705710

Useless 2004-12-14 12:38 AM

Kill that exit link to Google. They have plenty of traffic already. If the surfer wants to get away from your site, they can use their back button or close their browser. As was stated before, where's the extreme fucking?

Cleo warned you about those huge watermarks on the images and you said it was fixed, yet those images are still watermarked. I don't know what the sponsor is thinking when they pull that shit, but I wouldn't touch that content. It's worthless. It's also overused.

You definately need to work that text a bit more. Make the surfers want to be a member.


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