please review my first free site
 

hi.

http://www.porn-pirate.com/samplefre...abe/index.html

i know that text is the way to go - not graphics. its just a rough draft to see if i have the general idea right. any comments are appreciated - especially the negative ones. thanks, rl

YOU CANNOT HAVE "ENTER" anywhere on the index page except to enter your picture galleries. So, that Enter India Uncovered here has to go off the index page.

It looks a bit off in FireFox.

Looks ok in IE6 though.

In general, you need to talk to the surfer more.

You get 3 links per page. Use them.

The eye is usually drawn towards the pics...so if you can get a good banner WITH text attached up top then put it there.

Ideally, you don't want them to look at your content at all. :)

That text up top - would you read a paragraph if you were searching for porn? ;)

That may be OK inside your pic galleries. Not the index and main page IMO.

"These Chicks Take It In EVERY Hole And Beg For More!" is good add text.

Get a different Banner or use just a Text link up top under your title.

Big, bold, short ad text.

Don't use the same banner more than once. If it didn't turn them on the 1st page, it won't get them to click next page.

OK. You pic galleries- dude...break them up into smaller rows.

You are there to sell the site. You get 3 links....use them.

I like to use 24 pics 'cos that gives me 3 rows of 4 per pic gallery that allows me to put a nice css rollover between each row. They will mouse over a text link that changes color and that may grab their attention.

Having a block of pics like that is just not efficient.

You MUST mix up the ad text for the actual link.

"Indian Super Hotties Spreading Their Legs Wide!" is good. Picture a nice css rollover in a big font.

It's better if you have more call to action words like "CLICK HERE NOW"

Does the site have videos too? Does it have live chat? We know all adult sites will have pics.

btw, Indian is my best selling niche. So...I dunno why I am helping. :)

It looks nice, clean...but doooood...you GOTTA put the sales suit on big time.

xxx
 

awesome review man :) this site is just testing the waters a bit so i wont actually fix them on this test site. but when i build my first REAL free site i will definately use your advice.

more text ads with hover color change to get surfers attention.
24 pics - 2 pages w/ 3 rows of 4 with juicy text links between.
ad table at the bottom of the page = bad idea
3 links per page - use them
test in firefox too
eye drawn towards the pics - take advantage of that
big bold short ad text
more calls to action

got it. thanks again for the review.