Please review this site
 

and tell me why you wouldent list it
http://www.sexpicfree.net/ftv/pic/ftvhfs.html

oki
index page is here http://www.sexpicfree.net/ftv/pic/ftvhfs.html
main page here http://www.sexpicfree.net/ftv/pic/page1.html
gallery are here http://www.sexpicfree.net/ftv/24/gallery1.html

theres no site sorry I see door way page! :(

Not sure what MRNick was saying... but..


Bake,

it looks like a doorway tacked in front of a 2 TGP galls.. That in and of itself is not a rejection reason(though it is for some) but it can count against you...

Also your site has no "title" - you cant call it "FTV Girls" because that is the name of the sponsor.

The HTML title says "FTV Girls extreme masturbation" - but there is no masturbation.

Some LLs wont take a site that "changes dir"

/ftv/pic/
/ftv/24/

There are some other little things.. but the basic structure is not too bad. Some LLs would list it as is.

DD

Lines like this"Masturbation public nudity real orgasm's fetish theme" make me think mass produced junk site, and I wouldn't list it.

You might be able to hide that in a description tag or something, but as big text on the page, it just tells me that it was tossed together with a word shredding bot.

Alex

Thanks agian Danger Dave things have change alot since I last made them on mass Ive been looking at lots of sites and to be honest they all seem very simple I must be missing something because Im not understanding.

The change of directorys seems a odd one I allready have the thumbs and big pics loaded in folder 24 (for Example) and a TGP gallery is living in there as well so for me its easyer to load the html in folder 24 and link it from there I cant see how thats a problem or how I can cheat because of it?

If you had some time Danger Dave I really like to talk to you on ICQ 77762980.

I actually copied that text stright from the site and if you look in the members thats what you will find in there. I only post the softcore pics and I dont use the hardcore but the members area is full of it.

Bake, jumping around folders is a sign that you didn't build a site, just a page. It isn't hard to just copy the html over and keep the entire site in one place.

As for the wording, well, copying right from a site isn't always the best way to go. Taken out of context, it is a meanless line of gibberish. Even in context, it is a fairly weak bit of text.

You have no masturbation or toys on your free site, so your sales pitch really doesn't match the type of traffic your site would generate.

Alex

Thanks guys Im going back and making new graffics with more masturbation pics. I guess I need to copy over the content to keep it all in one folder will take up more server space but if that what it takes Ill do it.

Hi Bake,

All of the above points of view are valid.However your site is clean your photos are of good quality and we would be glad to list your site.

Downline

Ok is this better http://www.sexpicfree.net/ftv/pic/ftvhfs.html

Can you please have a fresh look now Ive made some changes.

I still think the message is confused - your talking abuot masturbation and giant rubber toys, and the galleries are softcore cutie stuff.

Worse, you have a great sales pitch on the bottom on the index page, and NO LINK TO THE SPONSOR! Just like any other business, you have to ask for the sale. Why put that down there, let them read for all that time, and the only thing they can do is click enter to go to your free site?

Your sales pitch should match the content, or the content should match the pitch. Otherwise you will get listed in softcore cutie sections on link lists, and those people aren't asking for dildo ramming hardcore.

That's just me.

Alex

That really is a GREAT ad on bottom of the first page... and definitely needs a link!! I even wanted to click it to find out more! I would use that on the main page as my feature sales copy.

I don't sgree with Alex about the relevence of content though.. a linklist might prefer to see a Dildo if you mention a dildo... but I don't think surfers would find your ad copy off topic and I really like the way you use the softcore pics to tease harcore buyers.

I would not appreciate you trying to target the paysite's copy to hit SE terms that people will already be using to find my site, if I owned FTV.. they may not mind though.

I have a good relationship with the guys from FTV. I currently make there hosted galleries and are one of there top affilates. Im exploring getting back into free sites and really just testing tempaltes that I will use but I need to find the balance between what sells and what keep the link list owner happy.

Not from a link site point of view, but from a surfer point of view. the images are very slightly too long, meaning that browsers with auto-resize on them will shrink them (and do a horrible job of it) making the images look a little fuzzy. You might want to adjust them slightly to not be quite so long.

Alex