Can You Guys Tell me What i need to fix
 

I'm Working on this page format. I'm from the old school that is now dead. I don't want to be dead, too, so I am trying to design with the tips I have found here.. Please check it out & don't be kind. Thanks, Xrandog

http://free-xxx-sex-pics.biz/orgasmnina/warning.htm

Re: Can You Guys Tell me What i need to fix
 

Could get pass the enter link :( The recipt table looks ok but the colors are off white on a light blue dont stand out to well :(

enter and exit llinks don't work... why use buttons like that anyway?

the color combination is very hard to read... thin red links over light blue over white lettering is a combination that just makes my eyes go wonky... if you are doing light colors backgrounds, stay will darker colored text and links.


Alex

I couldn't get the enter button to work, at least I think it was the enter button, I was blinded by your color scheme |sad|

Thanks, try this
 

I changed background, enter,link, text and reduced ad pic size. Help me out. that was great. Obviously, you know I personally like bright colors.

I got inside this time. The color scheme made me ill. Your full size images are wayyyyyyyyy to big. You'll have a huge BW bill if you leave them that size.

OK
 

Well, What would be a nice BG color?

Nice is subjective, I can tell you statistically "black" BG sells best.

At the top of the warning page the "join here" graphic isnt linked...although it looks like its supposed to get clicked to enter the paysite

The gallery pages would get it declined due to the number of sponsor links - 3 is usually the limit - some places its 2

Workin', Workin'
 

Told you guys I needed some help. Now that my figertips are bleeding from correction, I am taking all the suggestions and hopefully by Miller time, I will have something constructive. Good thing I have Front Page. Here it is again

I DO appreciate the help. Obviously, I seemed to be lost.

http://free-xxx-sex-pics.biz/orgasmnina/warning.htm

It's easy on my eyes now. If it were me I would set my table borders to "0" |rasta|

Where'd you get that content from? It's not that nice looking :(

It's old junk
 

I'm just using some old pics until I get the bugs worked out...I had some earlier on there that were A 250k ea. Just trying to get a format down & then go on.

My 0.02cAU,

Site needs a Title! on the warning page
The flashing "Join Here" graphic needs to go..:(
Textarea warning needs to be smaller
The spinning graphic needs to go..:(

Resize this pic properly.. dont just "squeeze" it - http://free-xxx-sex-pics.biz/images/DBD0265.jpg
The ad on the left side of - http://free-xxx-sex-pics.biz/orgasmnina/Enter.htm - looks broken up?

The galleries could be alot neater...

DD

Tweak,Tweak
 

Thanks, Dave, & all of you. Once the rest of the feedback gets +, I'll work on the thumbpics. Should have saved the original to compare how far this has come.

Looking better, the big yellow table on this page http://free-xxx-sex-pics.biz/orgasmn...stgallery2.htm needs to be no bigger than the blue tables.

Yellow table
 

Did you mean the width? I think so, so I changed it. Man, glad I have a good editor!|shake|

That looks better |rasta|

I know most of the owners of your recip list. I don't thinkJay would like his site listed as "JJ's" he rather likes the way it is "JJJ's" |jackinthe

oop!
 

And I knew that! Glad I'm finally getting down to typo's