Opinions about my first hub
 

so here comes my first tiny hub,a toons one http://toons-adult.com/
post your opinions and critique critique critique |bananna|
what should I add,what should I remove?
Is the SEO a bit spammy?
and how can I drive traffic to it |pink
tnxxx |headbang|

You might want to change that "Enter the site" (in red font) link. ;)

hehehehehe :D
and I was wondering if all the surfers clicked sponsors' links |king|
now what's your opinion about the site ;)

*Bump* |jackinthe

Looks all right to me. Not much there, hard to really say much. Does'nt look to spammy, though I've heard a lot of linked text is not good. Cant say it's true.

"ENTER THE SITE And see more free pictures as the one on the left." where's the left?

ronnie

http://www.smithsmedia.co.uk/GG/

I had a play see what you think, I think you need to work on some more text, if cant do it get the sponsor to sort it out, if they wont find another sponsor :-)

oh thanks for taking the time rebuilding this for me |king| was very kind of you
I have built the page then removed some banners and pics and this is why there are some meaningless sentences.
I'm going to go through it again to change whats wrong but this would be after a month because of my fucking exams |shocking|
thanks again bud ;)