please review my free site and gallery
 

Hi

For 2 months now I have been learning to make galleries and free sites, now I have tried to make free site and 2 galleries using the same pics and design.
Please review It and tell me If there Is anything wrong or should I change anything.

free site:
http://www.naturalpussy.net/tgp/kaliyah/index.html

galleries:
http://www.naturalpussy.net/tgp/kali...pussy_gal1.htm

http://www.naturalpussy.net/tgp/kali...pussy_gal2.htm

Thx in advance for help and usefull suggestions.

Hi Mniki,

I think they're nice looking and should probably get listed at many places.

You should add a title on the index page though, like "Hairy Kaliyah" or what the site is called.
You also have a typo on the gallery pages "VIST" should be "VISIT".
One thing that looked kinda odd was the 1st picture in gallery 2. Not sure if gallery 2 continued from gallery 1 and the 1st picture was just a random pic or gallery 2 was a whole new set.

Good luck :)

Yeah I noticed that spelling mistake too. But apart from that it all looks ok, fast loading page, right number of pics, so there won't be any problems submitting.

Best of luck

Will fix mistakes , and about that odd pic, gallery one and two are 2 different pic sets,

i think they all look good from your freesite to galleries.
just fix some of the spelling error and you're set.

I think they look pretty good, like the colors and layout. Only thing, with the free site, is the pictue on the index/warning page, kinda graphic, might be a problem some places.

ronnie

Can you explain a bit, I am not sure I understand

Mniki, I'm think, ronnie means that some reviewers may consider this picture as a hardcore on a warning page and not list site.

Nice site, I would list it

Ya, thats what I was trying to say..:)

ronnie

Ok, thx

I agree....looks pretty good to me...as Ronnie mention some would reject you for having that large pic on the warning page. It was the first thing that came to mind when I viewed them. Looks good there, but just to play it safe you could replace the warning page pic with a large banner instead.

will try to make a version with large banner instead pic