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Hey all... once again I'm here asking for your precious help!

I just builded my first freesite.

Give it a look -> http://absolute-porn.net/free/teens/

I busy with other niches but this is the one thats finished, the others are basicly the same, so what ever changes you guys suggest here, i would change on others... no need to asking 78457125 times :P

Ok, the main questions are:

>> What do you think of my first job?
>> Where to get it listed? (For best convertion) - (for the recips...)


P.S.: LinkList owners, if you want to list me, SPAM your links here for me ;)

More than a few problems here apart from the fact that all the images are broken.

- Way too many ads/page
- Java
- Links opening in new window

Either of these things will get you declined most places. You might want to check out the rules pages of some major LLs and re-do your freesite.

My bad... Pictures are working again.

> Ill remove some Ads on my pages and fix the ' target="_blank" '
> Java? Where mate? :| :|


Thanks...

More reviews are welcome.

Alright.

I have made the changes.

> No new open windows links.
> Removed PUB. (looks much better now, indeed, thanks)








Gimme those reviews!

* iframe (+ blind links in one of them)
* Huge pics (the ones I looked at were 125k+)
* What Lemmy already said, you have way too many links/ads for most LL's

Bookmark this page

Ohh... that's the java you talking about...
Should i remove it? :|


swedguy... the iframe is from AFF, nothings wrong i guess...
The pics i have to resize them, and reduce them, taking too much time loading... thanks!

Since it violates the rules of most LLs, yeah. :D Like I said before, you should check the rules of the major LLs and save yourself a lot of trouble later on.

Yeah... sure will...

Any good LL list around there? :D

While I wait for an good LL list... i have made some changes.

> Removed JAVA
> Removed IFRAME
> Removed 125x125 banners (looks cleaner now)
> Resized all the non-Thumbnail pictures. Now, max size of some is 85k



So... what do you think now?

Now you replaced the iframe with a javascript, that's as bad and the thumbs from AFF are blind links.

I still get 11 sponsor links on your index page (excluding the AFF script).

Regarding link lists, here's a good start: http://www.greenguysboard.com/resour...fic/index.html

Damn... i gotta see this again... :|

too much ad's and it made it look messy..

Which ads are you talking about?

Think every one is trying to help. But as mentioned, way to many links on the index, no one will list it. As swedguy said, the iframe is not good, some links lists will not list the site because of it. You dont have control of it, other sites could add who knows what to the site through the iframe.

ronnie

Yes i know.

I am busy re-molding the site mates.

IFRAME has gone, SCRIPT is gone also.

Almost all the pub is gone also.

Later i will upload so you guys see it.

Ok... just updated.


Tell me now! ;)

You can have up to 3 ads per page, so you did'nt ned to take them all off. The one you do have left, will probably be seen by most as a blind link. Same for the other places you have it. Even if you just add the paysite name in it somewhere, wont be seen as blind.

Do some different text you have by ads. Looks like you use the same thing on all the ads. Not every one will click on every ad, of course, so use different ones to try and catch more. I dont think "decline" is good sexy talk..:) Plus you want them to be thinking, yes, yes, yes, and click.

ronnie

Can you gimme ideas... I didnt understand very well...

What would you do if you were me?

Ok... check out now mate.

http://www.absolute-porn.net/free/teens/


Looking better?

On your index you have "Do you want to fuck today? Click here" , it's a blind link. Bare minimum, put in the sponsors name. index2 , you have "looking for a date? Just Sex? [See here how to get one]", again a blind link, your not letting them know where they are going, plus the sentence does'nt make sense. Same on the other pages you use the same text. I am guessing english is not your first language? Pardon me if it is. Alot of the english is off, does'nt make sense, bad grammer.

If I was you, I'd work on the text, it's not to bad, but could be a little more exciting, or stimulating. Or try it like it is and see how it works. Did'nt give me a urge to click.

ronnie

I prefer working on the language mate! ;)

Thanks for the terrific advices you provided me!

looks great now :)

Thanks virux! :D

One question. Why promote a big tit sponsor on a teens site? Would it not be better to promote another teens sponsor?

just a thought.