Please Review My Free Site...
 

Hi!
This is my first post here.
Can I get your opinion about my free sites, please? What do I wrong, can I improve something?

http://zozonsex.com/imlive/americanbabe/1a/index.htm
http://zozonsex.com/imlive/countrygirl/1a/index.htm
http://zozonsex.com/imlive/camgirlsandra/1a/index.htm
http://zozonsex.com/imlive/lonelygirl/1a/index.htm
http://zozonsex.com/imlive/teenpussy/1a/index.htm

Those are my first five free sites, what I build...

Any advice is welcome...

Tnnx!

Looks good for me mate...

But let the experts come over here ;)

Nice sites with good layout. Some of them were submitted to my LL (thanks!) and I listed them, though I have some tips about how to improve them.
First, I see that your "EXIT" link is linked to Google. I think that it is not too wise, find a non-adult sponsor for this purpose.
I see that all your sites are based on the same template, on warning page you are changing only site background and after some time of posting you probably will get rejections with a reason "Template site". Also, after some time your convert ratio on these template sites may getting lower. Build 30 different templates and use every of them once a month.
I see that you use the same recips table on all of your sites. Many LL's don't like it, because in this case they will lose fresh traffic from their recips.
I recommend you to read this topic about templates, it is very useful: http://www.greenguysboard.com/board/...ad.php?p=30947
This site: http://zozonsex.com/imlive/lonelygirl/1a/index.htm has a wrong title "Cam Girl Sandra" on a top of warning page.

They look OK to me. I'm not too crazy about some of the backgrounds though, they're very distracting. Go for a solid, not too bright, color instead.

Sites look good to me. Clean an easy to look at. Try changeing the template a bit on your next submissions though.

looks good to me

Ya, as said, would be nice to have different templates. Also, some of the recips, the text did'nt show up well, hard to see/read.

ronnie

I'd have to agree, outside the recip text colors being messed up, the sites look good.

I also have to agree...they look fine to me...but as a webmaster with a link directory, I'm pretty flexible. ...now just have to add them to my LD ;) AS you build more, try to develop really unique designs for your sites because it creates even more chances of being accepted :)

looks fine but maby a little boring. try to develpo your fantasy ;)

OK thanks for advice, I'll try to do some different templates, and change recipes text colors, etc, etc...

http://zozonsex.com/imlive/teenpussy/1b/index.htm
http://zozonsex.com/imlive/roundbabe/1a/index.htm
http://zozonsex.com/imlive/uniformbbw/1a/index.htm
http://zozonsex.com/imlive/biglady/1/index.htm

not bad put em on my top 50 is the only comment i got lmao