Can I get some constructive feedback?
 

I took on a new client about a month ago. And we are having some of the tours on his sites redone.

Its been a while since Ive tuned up a paysite so Id like to get a little feedback on the latest tour redesign we have done for this client.

http://www.gonzofilms.com/depraveddo...rash/tour1.htm

http://www.gonzofilms.com/depraveddo...rash/tour2.htm

http://www.gonzofilms.com/depraveddo...trash/join.htm

Thanks for your time

I like the 1st one best.

Thank you. Of course I have to get out my spell checker...never feed a designer while hes working.

In my opinion they are all good, but if I had to choose.. it would definately be the first one. Good luck with the tours GonZo :)

Thank you. Its been a good day of feedback across all of the boards. Honestly I dont know why programs dont work with webmasters in regards to making tour changes?

I know it takes a broadstroke to tune a tour for mass appeal but theres no way in hell a program owner can know all the traffic coming into his site sas well as his affiliates.

Thanks to all for the input. We will be using them all with some modifications as suggested by all.

After all the name of the game is making the sale. Why tune a tour if your not going to use the input?

SHould have the final version online in a week. If you like what you see and have traffic that fits...try sending it. It retains.

Yes I agree number 1 has a slight edge. Content is better on that tour also.

They all look good to me, but then I am graphically challenged ;)

I'll agree on tour 1, tour 2 is nice too but I'd be sending my traffic to #1...the tribal chick at the bottom of tour 2 kinda throws the whole "trailer" thing out the window. Honestly the join page looks a bit busy to me.

Lookin' good Gonzo :)