Please Critique...It's my first free site...
 

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I've been working on this since last weekend. It's my first site and I need some more feedback. Any suggestions from an experienced webmaster or two would be appreciated.

http://www.allteencafe.com/warning.html

Thanks!

Looks very nice to me :D

Looks good to me too.

Be careful on using the word "young".

Looks good from down here.......

DD

Looks good from Up North :)

It looks really nice! My only question--booty college on the page with the gauge gallery. Might not be the paysite a lot of your surfers who are attracted to gauge would go for.

other than that very minor thing---wow! I Like it!~

Looks great. I'd maybe look at adding a bit more content, and not make it so easy to find your way back to the main page. If you keep giving links to the other galleries and the main page, people are less likely to click on a banner.

Very well done, though.