suggestions for my free site
 

hi all,
I`ve built a new free site and wanted to post it for review and suggestions and here it is:
http://jakeslinks.com/hardcore/crazy-party-chicks8/

thanks in advance
stfuvt|bananna|

See you took some of the ideas from your last post and its starting to look better. A few thoughts:

Pages:
Text still looking a little crunched around the edges... spacing. Did you mean to put two internal links to your own site right next to each other? (Jake's Adult & Free Porn Links) on the entry page?

Content pages:
Your missing a link back to the main page from each content page. Make the surfer go back to the main page and look at your ads to get to the second content page.

I see you've added a second sponsor site to your content pages, now add a little sales text too to tell the surfer why they might want to visit that site.

"Alt tags" on your pictures should describe what the picture is about. This gives you a chance to use and add some "keywords" to your site. Don't overdo it, a few words in a short sentence is all that's needed. Keyword stuffing is frowned upon by the SE's.

Same thing with the "Title" and "Content" meta tags. Change them to be different from each other and reflect the page you are showing not necessarily the site you are promoting.

Looks better in Firefox than your other site but still a little spacing problems around the banners.

How's the load speed with those animated banners and 16 pics?

Hope this helps!

Index and main aren't bad, but your galleries need some work. Add some padding in your

Agreed on all the above comments |thumb

I don't know wtf the sponsor was thinking with those banners. The promos for that particular site have got to be some of the most obnoxious in the business. However, as much as those banner annoy me...it wasn't solely those that got the site declined when I reviewed it last night. Though they did add to the decision to decline the site.

The gallery banners being so close to the pics also factored into the decline. But, the real kicker was the extremely poor quality of the pics themselves. Those are some of the worst vid caps I've run across and that's saying something...cuz I've seen some bad ones. Some of em are so fuzzy, I just couldn't accept the site.

I know you're trying hard...and that site was actually fairly clean overall. I was ready to let the obnoxious banners slide...was even ready to let the cramped feel on the galleries slide. But, those pics pushed it over to the 'can't accept this' stack :(

Try to find some less annoying ads if you want to promote that site and loosen up your design a little. And if the sponsor can't do better than that content wise...it may be time to either buy content...or find another sponsor.

You're on the right track Stfuvt...don't get discouraged |thumb

thanks guys, you are really helping me :)
I hope MrYum that I am on the right track, but I am moving slow :)

If you have some time can you take a look at this free site for me, its my new creation.thanks again

http://jakeslinks.com/hardcore/hardc...rty-at-jeffs8/


all the best, stfuvt

Stfu, what do you use to compress your big pics? They look grainy. |huh

Yep, you're definitely on the right track |thumb

Agree with Halfdeck...the image quality isn't great. But, I'm not sure how much quality can be expected when the shots are taken in that environment. The quality is a lot better than the last site and definitely not a reason for decline imo.

I'm not real crazy about the underline changing to overline on mouseover, but that's a personal preference. Again, not something I'd decline a site for on its own.

This site is however going to be difficult in the hardcore category. There's one oral pic in the first gallery and maybe 4 or 5 in gallery two...hard to say for sure due to the whole 'party' thang going on. I've never been inside that particular paysite, but the content used to promote it sure isn't impressive.

Overall, your site design is fine though |thumb

thanks guys, I think I made the big pics a little better this time as you said.The program I use is Easy Thumbnails.

don't feel bad stfuvt, I haven't even made my first site yet.|banghead|

For what it's worth, I think your design looks good overall|thumb

Your skills are coming along but I still don't like that sponsor content :(