Quick review please
 

Hey:D Just wanted to know if this one is ready for take off.As always,thanks|thumb

http://www.dickheadshit.com/bustychristy.html

here goes.. sorry if i offend, not in a great mood lol..

Recips: PK's has a enter on it which may be a prob with some ll's cos its above the real enter link, Mr Yums text is invisible and I think the recip table is ugly.

2nd page: The text "Free Gallery 1" goes to the wrong gallery.
You really should be doing free sites in subdirectorys.
I don't like your gallery layouts, they look messy to me. Maybe line the thumbs up better.

:D thats all I got, a bit blunt but hey...

Perfect! Just the kind of review I was looking for.
I had no idea that certin LL's counted recips that said "Enter" as actual "Enter".Now I know and that banners history!


If you didn't catch that then I sure as hell wouldn't of.

Ok for this one you can just go to hell! JK :D


No,you were being kind!Being a bit blunt would be "Hey Star Man,Your gallery looks like ass!" or something along those lines.

Anyhow thanks for the review. I'm going to clean it up right now.And please keep the blunt reviews coming.

Hey,

Hoes banner also has 'Enter Now' on it.

And like Natalie pointed out, most linklists request that the submitted page be an index page within a folder.

So you could have it like this:

http://www.yoursite.com/bustychristy/index.html --->
http://www.yoursite.com/bustychristy/main.html --->
http://www.yoursite.com/bustychristy/gallery1.html
http://www.yoursite.com/bustychristy/gallery2.html

Try to keep each site within the one folder, some linklists don't like directory changes within the site.

Hope this helps :)

Lisa

Yep,got it.

Yeah,about that.I kind of went ahead and submitted just prior to posting this review.|banghead| At the last second I thought just to be on the safe side I better see what you guys think and decided to post it(good thing).I only submitted this page,no duplicates so Hopefully I can make it past round one without getting knocked out,but if it happens it happens. I FOCKED OP!

As I mentioned before, using paysite name for your free site title will get you rejected by some reviewers.

"Enter The Free Galleries" is roman maroni (defies English grammar). "The free galleries" is implying there's only ONE free gallery from a reader's point of view, which just doesn't make sense because there are a crapload of free galleries out there on the net.

Also, try not to use the word "free" too freely...

http://www.dickheadshit.com/images/busty10.jpg <--- This thumb doesn't correspond with the big pic I'm seeing. In fact, I see the same thumbnail dead center on gallery 2.

Personally, I don't like how you laid out your recip table either; the recips look squished together and should be spaced out more evenly.

I'd also remove banners to other sites from your sponsor and just focus on one paysite. Right now it feels like you're promoting MacDonalds and Wendys with one commercial.

EDIT: And next time, please ask for a review before you actually submit. Otherwise we're all wasting our breath :)

Hey there Star Man...I sent you a PM about this site when I reviewed it last night.

Yeah,I should have went over it before sending it out.Way,Way to many fuck ups.I'm thinking about getting another editor also.I'm using this editor with a built in FTP program and it's cool and all but it's almost TOO convenient.I'm always uploading even when I don't have to and thats part of my problem also.Well anyway,I hope I still have time to change my "village idiot" status around here LOL!|jackinthe

Regarding the editor...I'm a big believer in hand coding. If you must use an editor, make sure you know every piece of superfluous code it inserts doesn't cause problems.

Anything that insists on uploading as you build...I wouldn't touch. Those are functions I prefer to keep separate.

You've got nothing to worry about with the 'village idiot' status. There are MUCH more capable candidates around here for that title! Actually, I'll bet you can find a thread right now that trumps your minor transgressions quite easily :D

Well thats a relief! It's good that I can tell myself "My free sites look like I paid a second grader to make them.I actually attempted to pawn off interracial smut to boob lovers and some dude in bum f#ck Egypt is making me his bitch by getting more traffic then me on MY server(hot link post)" And I can still say "OH YEAH??.......Look at THAT IDIOT!!!!"|pokefun|

I love it!!!|thumb |headbang|

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