5th attempt
 

ALOHA, Happy St. Patrick's day everyone. I spent the night with a bottle of wild turkey, 20 great photos of Lauren, dreamweaver and fireworks. Topped off with ftp to my server and BAM, created my 5th attempt at a freesite. I plan on using it as a HFS, and submitting it to LL as well. After carefully looking at my past efforts and taking everyones helpful advice into consideration, I realized I could do better. What do you think?

http://www.laurensands.com/freesites...e-butt-LS.html

ALOHA

Was it the old Virginia Slim ad? "You come a long way, baby". I did not attempt to look at it in the eyes of a reviewer, but I like it and you will get better.

Reminds me of the old days (about two years ago) when folks came here for advice and all in our community were ready and willing to help. You came, asked, received and accepted the good and the bad. I think it is time to fly. :)

Thanx Chop! With all the intense variation on "rules" and layouts, I am trying to make sure I create one that is as universal as possible and will be accepted by LL owners. Then I will go from there, making variations on a theme. Im glad I came here and got into freesites, from the traffic I have had from it so far, it has been great! ALOHA

Your site looks pretty good. If you decide for submit it to my LL, I'll accept it for 100%

Thats a nice clean looking site, most people would list that :)

Those red latex stocking are barely visible (actually there are only few pics where you can see them at all) so this may cause some rejections (sites name not fitting content). Other than that, site looks nice - I would list it |thumb

I think your on your way to becoming a first class free site builder. That combined with a hot model like Lauren and you should do well.

Feel free to add me to your sub list |thumb

I think it's a great free site, I'd list it :D You have a beautiful wife Logan!

SWEET! Thank you guys! Ya, I realize that only a few photos show the red latex stockings, its more like a bikini gallery. I have a thing about red. Im hoping it will be ok, but I will need to look more carefully before naming it next time! ALOHA

I would list it

WOW
 

I really appreciate the response! I will try and submit to everyone!
ALOHA

wow, I looked at it and got really hot with all that red background.

But seriously, it looks good.|thumb

submit, submit, submit.

she's got a great Waist to hip ratio, beautiful curves, she'll sell with a layout like that for sure. As long as you emphasise those curves in the pics you'll do well.

hehe, thanks, I am preparing a mass submission party with me and Lauren! ALOHA

Nice site :) On another note I get a 404 error when trying to get to your hosted galleries :(

Now Think Volume!

Hey Mister...how much for your woman???

Sorry, Lauren just looks so good...made me wanna use that line from the original Blues Brothers movie :D

Nice site Logan...tastefully done and for a very sexy lady |thumb

Yeah don't you just love that bubble butt? I have tried to be extra nice to Logan thinking that I could get an invite to the island. :D

You are a clever devil Chop :D

Yea, I've always been a butt man! Something about those curves and that magical spot right where the thigh meets the butt cheek in the back...OH MY! HUBBA HUBBA!

My girlfriend has been tanning the past couple weeks since the weather has warmed so nicely. Gotta love those thong bikinis!