Starting up free sites again
 

and need some input from the pros :)

here is a couple ill be submitting...

http://www.sexylittleasia.com/free/i...een/index.html
http://www.sexylittleasia.com/free/2/index.html


any comments (good or bad) would be great

Thanks

Baxter

I'd say that the pics being out of order is the most obvious problem. She's naked, she's dressed, she's naked, she's half dressed, she's naked, etc. Greeny spits out a big mouthful of Redbull whenever he sees that kind of thing.|greenguy| I looked at one pic that was 240kb. We like to see those sizes down to a max of 80kb or so.

From a selling standpoint, I'd personally place more ads. We still allow 3 per page, so you might as well use them. I'd definately put one below the enter/exit links on the index.

no link for 2257??

Adding to UW's spot on comments |thumb

The main page sponsor links on that first site will get you some declines. Some count the intent of the ads...you should be fine with those reviewers. However, some count actual hrefs...I count 6 on that page. You only have one on the galleries though...so spread those suckers out a bit...no more than 3 per page.

Also, there are some issues with your whois info that may cost you listings.

Some meta tags throughout and sales text on your gallery pages couldn't hurt either. Give the SE's something to find.

Add some linked sales text below the banners.

And my personal recommendation on those three outbound links Useless mentioned, make one of them your blog network to get some more traffic flowing to it. But that's just me. :)

Not necessary

so would somehting like this work better?

http://www.thepropc.com/angel-to-slu...ls/baxter.html
http://www.thepropc.com/my-asian-mas...ts/baxter.html
http://www.thepropc.com/big-black-pi...rs/baxter.html

That domain solves the whois issues |thumb

On the first site, you'll want to change the title tag to match the site instead of the paysite.

And some of your full size images are still over 100k.

The 2nd site has no ads on the entry page which always causes concern. And your free site title is awfully close to the paysite name...that will cost you some listings.

Image sizes on site 2 look better...at least the ones I looked at. However, they look like vidcaps...be sure to read individual list rules carefully as some don't accept vidcaps at all.

Site 3 entry page almost looks like a paysite entry, but guess that's not really a problem if you can work a recip table in there cleanly.

Some of the images are over 100k again...and again, be careful of the vidcaps when submitting to some link sites.

Overall, this group is fairly clean...a bit of tweaking and you should be good to go |thumb

And they should be slapped with half-cooked pasta. :D

No arguments here big fella :D

I count the intent of the ad within reason |thumb

Just out of curiosity, how would you count an ad with no link? aka phone sex ad with just a number. It's for profit but it's not an actual link. :D

Well, since I don't actually count hrefs (again, within reason)...I'd have to count that phone number as an ad...therefore adding it to the 3 ads per page allowed |thumb

It's a good question as most LL rules say something to the effect of "3 outbound links per page".

But to use a phone sex number to skirt the rules, wouldn't put you in the best light with most LL owners.

As for counting hrefs, I don't either. I know I've had my own free-sites blocked at the submit point because the script detected too many href's, drove me batty.