New Review
 

Hey! Took a few days rest from rotting in front of my pc but once again ROT FACTOR is in full effect.Anyway,I started a new Kelli Young site last nite but instead of just ripping off the layout of the actual site and making my own piss poor watered down version like I normaly do,I tried to give it a unique look that I just kind of made up.I was checking out some free sites yesterday and saw a lot of SUPER good work done by other webmasters and was inspired.So basicly what I'm saying is,this kind of a concept free site.It may look ok or it might be the worste site by me so far.My eyes get so bad from my monitor after a certin period of time that I can't tell what looks good or bad sometimes.|dizzy|

On the warning page I had a extra outgoing link to play with so I just did this retarded thing with the fleshlight for the hell of it.If it looks dumb Ill take it down.As usual,all suggestions for improvment even if its not means for decline are much welcomed!|thumb

http://www.dickheadshit.com/perfectteenkelli/index.html

Ok, there are 2 things I noticed.

1. My recip isn't on that site, many LLs will reject you for that :D
2. It appears she gets half naked in the first gallery and is completely dressed to get half naked again in the second gallery. You should try to continue in the second set what you ended with in the first, if you know what I mean :)

Added: other than that the site looks really good |thumb

Thanks man|thumb Yeah I totaly agree about the content layout but thats basicly what I had to work with.Her content is weak.I was thinking of mixing it up a bit but I thought it would look way to obvious
that it was from 2 different sets.As for the first observation,consider it done!I Don't want to deal with all those rejection emails.:D

I noticed you submitted that site to my little pet LL TeenSpanker.com, thanks for that :)

Just a few things.
The majority of LL's likes it when you only use 3-4 words for your title, put the same title you use on your index page in de form's Title field. And you might want to keep your description somewhere around 10 words or so.
Just thought I should mention this :D

Check your Partner mail when you get a chance.:)

Looks good Star Man |thumb

Got your message too...no worries :)

Watch that Fonz guy...those leather wearing biker types are all trouble makers :D

I replied and expect a reply back so I can send you the final reply |dizzy|

MrYum confuses me with someone else, I like to wear pink and listen to Boy George and Village peolpe