Get listed - first site, see , say some comments
 

Hey, i'm new in this arena, actually four days :)

Here are some free sites i have done.

http://www.pornomagix.com/Iwantamateur/index.html

http://www.pornomagix.com/Hugedicksl...cks/index.html

please rewiev them, say some comments, what i can do better, what to change or what i did good.

It is taking me about 4 Hours to design one free site, and i think its too long what do you think should help me to design these sites qiucker?

Not bad for a noob |thumb

I've seen people at this biz for a year or two that haven't done this well.

You should remove that capital "I" & "H" from the URLs, that wil cause you nothing but trouble down the line and there's no need for them.

You have no metas or text on the pages for search engines. Sure you search engine traffic will never be huge, but every little bit helps.

Be careful on your recips, you need to check the color against your background color because Penibot's is NEARLY hidden (first free-site) and Jays XXX is completely hidden (on your second site).

All in all you got the basics down though and they look good. I'd list them, if you removed the hidden whois. |thumb

BTW, most linklists will not list you with a hidden whois.

check this out this is my fist site, let me know what you think. It took me a long time also. I must have changed the damn thing about 20 times before I was happy with it. Is it true that more then 2 banners per page makes it not convert as well? Also what is a normal converstion ratio?

If you are talking about the link in your sig, that's not even a free-site as we define them (I'd call that a fake TGP).

If you are not talking about your sig, well then you forgot to post the URL.

|loony|

Adding to Preacher's comments (which you'll definitely want to implement btw)...hidden whois and invisible recips will get you declined regularly.

Add a line or two of juicy text above and/or below your banners...make the surfer want to click. Just plain banners don't pull well at all anymore.

This is one of my personal peeves...not sure how other reviewers feel about it though. Sponsor links like "See blah blah on OUR site" or "Join US blah blah". To me those kinds of links imply that the paysite is under the same ownership as the site the surfer is currently on. This kinda muddies the water as to making it clear the link leads to a paysite not associated with where he is now. Again, jmo...but am curious what other reviewers think of this practice.

Back to your review :)

Your gallery pages on the first site could easily be wider and still fit at 800 wide (if you choose to widen em up, make sure they still fit at 800). Opening those up a bit would allow you to increase your text link size and possibly even your thumbs...and still have a nice balance on the page.

Other than those minor details...damn fine looking sites |thumb

Mighty fine =)

http://www.pornomagix.com/Hugedicksl...cks/index.html
has a few thumbs leading to the wrong pic.
If you are planning on using "huge dicks little chicks" as the site name(as the logo implies)you might run into troubles here and there, better to come up with your own.
Prehaps also link the 2257 info to the actual info.

Other than that and previous posts |headbang|

Thanks, everybody, lots of useful stuff you gave me :) Thanks

For a 4 days old free site builder you're doing just fine ;).

What you should do, being new... go to the big LLs out there, link-o-rama.com, penisbot.com, jays-xxx-links.com and check out a few of the free sites listed there. Analize them, see how others build them, how do they play with sale text and so on. Just look and inspire yourself, don't copy, I bet you don't need that after I saw the 2 free sites your posted above. You just need a little more inspiration, knowledge and experience. Good luck to you! :)

All -

Can someone pls tell me how to determine if my whois info is hidden?

Thx.

wrk4

One way would be to check your registrar.

Another would be to go here and plug in your domain name;

http://whois.domaintools.com/

If the results show anything other than your real information and host name servers, you'll likely have problems getting listed.

Ok. Thanks.
I haven't tried to do anything fishy but I'm a bit concerned because when I registered I selected private registration.

Pls have a look at this http://www.nedsnookie.com and tell me if it's cool.

Thx again

Just checked that domain...and yea, that private registration is going to cause problems getting listed :(

I'd strongly suggest you change the registration before submitting any free sites from that domain. Having private whois will cost you a lot of listings.

Due to the massive number of scammers and cheats, these days most link sites want to know who they're doing business with/linking to.

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Thx MrYum. I'll start working that issue like... now! |banghead|

ok so , i've changed my whois record, i still can't that anything is changed on this adress
http://whois.domaintools.com/

It might take a while to propagate the name change. Just wait a bit longer and be patient. While you are waiting build some more free-sites so that when you are ready to go you have some sites already built that you can submit (one a day at most LL's).

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Looks like propagation is complete |thumb

I was going to say the same thing as Mr Yum, you really need to work on the ads, as said regular banners dont pull crap for clicks, you could be working for nothing. And ya, talking like the text links lead to your own paysite, not real good, Plus wihout the paysite name, many LL 's might see them as blind links.

Only other thing, and this might just be me is I really dont like default table borders, they look amateurish to me, and I think can take away from the layout. Like I said might be just one of my things..:)

ronnie