Need a quick review
 

http://www.pornpartyporn.com/mini-po...een-threesome/

What do you think of it? anything that needs to be improved?

I am aware that Hoes and Sexysites recip is wrong, it's because they are down right now

think it will make any sales? guess that is the most important question:D

That freesite will get listed at most places I guess. I see no real rejection reasons on that one.

On a personal note, I myself don't like it when your pictures have different sizes. pe. one is 500px on the longest side while others are 666px on the longest site. If I was you (which I am not) I'd keep the all the same size (again, I'd go for the 666px size rather than the 500px one). That makes it a little easier for the reviewer since he doesn't have to check with every pic what the size is :)

In your experience will a site like that convert though?