hi guys,can you review mi first FS??
 

Hi guys¡

Today ,i´m doing mi first FS,it´s terrible?not very bad?
i think that all the rules are ok?do you think?

http://www.crazyporn.biz/fs/orgy-sex-party/

It´s all OK?

Thanks

Im on my second free site so Im twice as experienced as you :) So take this for what it is - one newbie giving a free site review to another.

Your index page has hardcore banner image on it. Some link lists dont allow any hardcore on the index / warning page.

Everything loaded very slowly for me. I mean VERY slowly. This may be something with my location. Just thought I should mention that.

The pages are very plain and the blue sponsor link on your galleries doesnt show up very well. Maybe a different color link would work better to bring attention to your ads.

You are allowed 3 links per page to sponsors (or your hub / personal links). I personally would use them. But since your pages are plain without any clutter 3 might be over doing it and 1 may be plenty (again, Im a newbie and havent even begun experimenting myself).

Good luck with it and your free site submitting :)

Cheers
WB

agree with warbot ,hardcore banner on index is a general no no, it was also slow loading for me too.
I would also suggest linking the photos on your main page to the relevant gallery, linking back to your main page instead off your index from the galleries and getting some more sale text on there.
good luck

hi guys¡

First,thanks for your replies,then i have a new question:

The 2257 info page is one of the three outgoing links?and it´s really necessary??

thanks a lot and good luck for the newbies¡¡ |bananna|

Well... It is required by law I believe. But from what Ive heard most link list owners dont want to be the 2257 police. Ive read a few rules that say that you have to have it to get listed on their site but not too many. As far as it being considered an outgoing link I dont think it is. Heres how I understand it:

If you link to a 2257 page it cant have any outgoing links on it.
If you use sponsor content you can link to their 2257 page. If their 2257 page has outgoing links on it its probably a good idea to host it on your own domain and remove the links or use a non-linked text of the url at the bottom of your page(s) that has to be copy and pasted into the address bar or typed in to get to it.

WarBot, you've obviously been doing your homework...well done |thumb

Spacacho...you do have a bit of work to do. All of WarBot's and Andy's comments are right on target.

Adding to what's been said...

Yes, your server is painfully slow. If it's an intermittent problem, you may be okay. But, if your host is generally this slow...it can and will cause your sites to be declined.

Your index page...

You've got a side scroll at 800 pixels wide...that's an instant decline with most lists, so you'll definitely want to make sure all pages of your site fit at 800 wide.

The red text and blue links on gray don't stand out very well. Try to make your pages easier on the eyes...it'll serve you well long term. Surfers are more likely to stick around and check out your site if it's easily readable.

"We had lots of crazy XXX-rated parties, and now
we have the vids – so come an enjoy!" is what's called a blind link. Here's a great thread to help you learn what a blind links are and how to avoid them.

http://www.greenguysboard.com/board/...ad.php?t=23441

Some of your recips aren't centered in their table cells and some are centered. Just looks kinda messy...would be better to have em all centered.

Main page...

Don't really see anything overtly bad here. Same comments regarding colors though...the text is pretty hard to read. And Andy is right, it is better to link the relevant pic to the gallery. Just makes the site a little friendlier :)

The page would be better balanced if both the gallery images were the same size. Just looks a bit 'off' as it is now.

Gallery one...

The text link on the left is blind.

The page layout of the thumbs could be better, though I don't think it's something that would get your site declined.

Gallery two...

Same blind link on the left. Same comment on the thumb layout.

That's about it for the site review. A couple other things to consider though...

That sponsor is very widely used and you may have some issues getting listed with their content.

Also, running that many recips while using the link list provided tables can be difficult to keep looking tidy. You may want to consider reducing your recips to 12 per page until you're comfortable enough to go to text only recips. With text only, it's easier to get more recips on a page and keep it looking good. But, it's not something I'd recommend until you've got a few sites reviewed and approved.

A 2257 page is not required by most lists. If you choose to run one, as WarBot mentioned...the page may have no outbound links on it.

Regarding whether the law requires a 2257 page, that's a pretty deep discussion. In short, yes...but the law is currently being challenged in court. Also, I believe you're not a US citizen...so as to whether US law applies to you...is up to debate.

All that said, I do run a simple 2257 page on all my sites :)

Looks like every one pointed everything out. I was just going to agree with the text being hard to read and kind of hard on the eyes, or my eyes are failing..:) and Ya, that type of content is so over used it's unreal, see so many of those kinds of sites and the same content over and over.

ronnie

hi¡

im working in mi FS and that´s the result:

http://www.crazyporn.biz/fs/orgy-sex-party/

thanks to you,are great¡¡ |boobies|

and you are right ,im from Madrid

a note:

mi server is in europe, do you think i had to search a hosting in US?can you tell me cool hosting from US? (i worked in the past with godaddy)

see you

Again, Im definately no expert, but I think your site doesnt break any rules and looks pretty good :)

Cheers
WB

P.s. your 2257 link is 404 not found.

Alot of people around here use http://www.colo-cation.com hosting. Apparently the owner is a GG & Jim regular and the hosting and support are very good. I use Phatservers.com myself and have only good things to say about them.

ok thanks for the answers.

Yesterday I did mi second FS and i have a new question?Do you see any blind link in the site?Is this OK?

http://www.crazyporn.biz/fs/hot-latin-vivi/index.htm

and can you tell me your favourite Link list??

Is still my hosting too slow?

thanks a lot

This ad is completely blind: http://www.crazyporn.biz/fs/hot-lati...iin320x160.gif

I don't think that the graphical ads on the galleries are blind, but they are a complete waste IMO. Think to yourself, would you click on those?

Mine, but I may be a tad biased. :D

Totally agree with Preacher...that image is WAY blind. Looks like a scrolling text box, but linked to the sponsor :(

The bottom right ad on your galleries is also totally blind. Actually, this one is pretty much the epitome of a blind link. Looks like more thumbs, but is linked to the sponsor.

Regarding server speed...yea, it's still very slow. Maybe not quite as bad as before, but still way too slow. I'm on an 8 mb cable connection and your 50k images were taking close to 15 seconds to load.

Consider this...a slow server hits you in 2 ways. First, if it's too slow...reviewers will decline your sites. Second, a slow server is a great way to turn off surfers. Within a few seconds, they'll get tired of waiting and leave your site. Do yourself a favor...either light a fire under your current host to resolve the issue. Or, find yourself a host that will keep your sites fast |thumb

Hi people¡

I re-edited my banner

http://www.crazyporn.biz/fs/hot-lati...iin320x160.gif

and put the text "IT´S ONLY 1.95" in the bottom right ad in my gals,Do you think it´s still blind?

http://www.crazyporn.biz/fs/hot-latin-vivi/index.htm

Thanks a lot

You must have changed the banner. The one I see on the index page, if thats what you are talking about, might look blind to some as it looks like a picture, or a link to a bigger picture. Also, your english needs work, "Vivi Latina Strips to you", maybe strips "for" you?

ronnie