Need feedback on first freesite
 

Hey guys I'm new to this forum though I'm not entirely new to the adult industry.

Anyway, I just built my first freesite and before I make the plunge and submit, I'd like to get some feedback on it. Any and all comments would be appreciated, as I'm just a total newbie when it comes to freesites.

http://hornyfrank.com/free/babe-deepthroats-dick/

Hi, welcome.

Index:
Way too much linked text in that ad box. Many lists say they accept up to 3 lines of linked text.
I'd take Tommy's recip off as you need a submitters account to get listed there and if you are new you most likely do not have one.

Main:
Looks good to me. |thumb

Galleries:
Too much linked text again.
Some of those pictures are kinda blurry.
Some of the pictures appear to be over 100K. A few linklists want them under 80, most want them under 100k.

Other then that, it looks really good. |thumb

Thank you so much for your comments!

I updated the gallery quite a bit; I changed the title, added new thumbs and new pics, and made the changes to the links like you said. I think it's pretty good, and I'm going to try a submit and see what happens.

If anyone else has any comments to add, I'm still and always ready to accept constructive criticism! :)

New url: http://hornyfrank.com/free/she-loves-deepthroat/

I didn't see the first attempt, but I don't have any issues with the way it is now. Looks good!

Great, I'm glad to hear it! :)

On a side note, is it a good idea to put META tags? Do they help with building PR and all that good stuff?

META tags aren't going to influence your PR (I think).
But they are good for your SE ranking and stuff, at least if they're relevant to what's on your site. I would certainly add them to every page you build.

"OOOPS! Page not found" |huh

Hmm, can't recall if this was on the first site and I just missed it, but some Linklists have a rule against hardcore on the index/warning page.

Check the third post. I wish I could edit my first post but apparently not...|huh

Ahh, yeah, it was. Alright well thank you I'll keep that in mind. |thumb

Thanks everyone for your continued feedback.