Critique my 1st Freesite Index
 

http://www.amateur-wife.net/freesite1.htm

Is this OK? Before I put the rest of it together... Thanks!

That looks fine.

It has a side scroll at 800x600. There are some linklists that still care about that.

You are only using 2 outgoing links, 3 are allowed not counting 2257

I'd have felt better if you put a |couch| after that :D

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You know I built it at 755px wide... When I preview in FF it is fine but in IE it does have a little side scroll???????? I will fix that... I was afraid that I might be nailed for having 4 outgoing links since the text links are separate from the image links...If not I will definitely throw another on ;-)

What's the couch mean |bow|

It means I wasn't intentionally taking a shot at Greenie for ignoring the rule he just got rid of as un-important. ;)

Any linklist worth submitting to is only going to see 2 outbound links on that page. You're golden. |thumb

Nice but where's is the rest of the site?

I have the rest up now... Does it look OK?

Ahh Shit...Pics are too small |banghead|

http://www.amateur-wife.net/neighbors_mom.htm

On that page you have 13 lines of linked text. Some LL owners don't like that. Best thing you can do is to just link the "call to action" text like "Watch them here" or "Click here".
Other than that your site looks fine :)

I resized the pics and took your advice on the linking Fonz... Thanks!

Stick with 750 with no borders on the table ot cells. For each border you add, take one off (so a table with a border of 1 pixel should be set to 749)

Overall pretty nice. You have room to put a black border around pics if you want though its strictly personal taste. Also some opinoins run that its best not to have pricing info and let the surfer find out by clicking thru. Might jazz it up with some unlinked sales text and REALLY important don't forget good metatags... descriptive title and content desc. but still overall pretty good.

Again personal taste but some like to offer a link to an alternate site in the same genre but different sponsor.

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Very clean site...well done |thumb

Completely agree with DJilla...a little juicy sales text is always a good idea |thumb

If you are going to continue using this domain to build other freesites you might want to change your url structure. Right now its amateur-wife.net/freesite1.htm but would be easier for you later if you set the site up in its own folder so the structure looks like this amateur-wife.net/freesite1/.

Plus I would change the freesite1 to something a little more creative like the title of your site. Just a thought.

Other than that I would list it

Thanks for all the great input guys!

Looks nice,well done

Your site looks good, just slap on some recips and submit!

Good luck :)