freesite review
 

here is my latest and so far the best ive done i know there are much better designers than me so critisize me til im as good as they are
or i run crying to my mommy either way.|thumb

You forgot the link. |thumb

HAHA this is GooSearch his boss!

here's the link
http://www.exhibitionist-sluts.com/freesite3/

Those images do add a some weight to your pages. I like it, but it may be a problem for sites that like to keep things dial-up friendly. |sad|

Also, looks like you rely on banners as your main draw to your sponsor. Banners can look pretty, but in my experience it's text that sells. A lot of surfers see banners as obnoxious advertisements, so they tend to ignore them. Text, and especially text links, is also a great way to easily make your 4 page advertisement full of flavor, and very enticing. |thumb

I assume those "link"s on your warning page will be recips? Can mine be in the first row? |couch|

I do not see a title on that site. Most Lists require a title to be on the first page. This has been mentioned before by a couple of people on your last one. Your image links to galleries are rather large and do seem a bit blind, IMO, since you are not sure if you are going to the gallery or the sponsor. Nothing wrong with image links but the size makes it feel like a half page ad to me.

Virgohippy stated what has been stated to you before on your last review. "Banners can look pretty, but in my experience it's text that sells." Plus you are giving the engine spiders nothing to chew on.

http://www.exhibitionist-sluts.com/freesite3/
I REMEMBERED THE LINK THIS TIME check this remake see what you think

Thats nice, it redirects to http://www.voyeurdorm.com/

And I had my heart set on seeing an exhibitionist slut. |sad| |cry|

http://www.exhibitionist-sluts.com/free3/
sorry vevrybody who got dumped in voyeurdorm i was rebuilding check it now I"M NOT CHANGING IT ANYMORE....maybe just a little my boss says i'll do what i'm told i gotta go now.......help me

Its still missing a title like: Two Lacey Hotties or something

Other than that its visually much better looking, at least for me. Gotta run back to work so I may have missed a few things but I would list it once the title is in place and my recip of course :)

2257? Cool looking index I think...54 second load time on a modem though.

is it just me or does the page redirect?

Try the second posted link. ;)