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gamester 2006-10-20 04:39 AM

Please review my freesites
 
I`v made my first freesites:

http://noxextreme.com/fs/terra/bigboobs/

http://noxextreme.com/fs/lauralion/busty/

I`ll be very glad if you can look at them and tell me your opinion

Thanks MrYum for first suggestion :)

gamester 2006-10-20 04:55 PM

bump :)

could somebody help me with my site

ponygirl 2006-10-20 05:24 PM

ok, I'm looking at the first one, and the 1st thing I notice is your 2257 page has adult links. That'll get you declined at quite a few places. Unlink the url, at least or make your own page.

2nd thing is that your enter link is a bit confusing - Primecups is the name of your sponsor, not your freesite.

The links in the middle of your galleries are totally blind - even with the text above and below. They're thumbs linked to the sponsor. If you want to leave them, unlink them or add text to them or something.

That content may or may not be overused to some LLs, I don't see too much of it yet so that wouldn't be an issue for me.

It has a nice clean layout, and the colors work nicely imo.

I'm making dinner right now, so that's all I had time for :)

Ponygirl

jonnydoe 2006-10-20 05:57 PM

In the states the price would be listed as $4.95...

gamester 2006-10-21 09:38 AM

Thanks for yours review and opinion :)
I`m just change link to 2257 and host this on my server without those link to porn and unlink thumbs in galleries

Do you think that header in each gallery is not to big for Ad`s

Thanks for any response :)

blinki bill 2006-10-21 12:50 PM

Look nice for me - but I'm not so old webmaster

Your doctype declaration is in conflict with the code of some recips
I believe that 3 day trial cost $2.95 not $4.95

Servhot 2006-10-22 02:20 AM

When you see the first link (after entered through the warning page) just ask yourself: Would you read all the stuff? Would you sign up with the site? Or would you just close it and visit the next site?


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