Please, review my first Free Site
 

This URL http://www.sex-girls-porn.com/free/pbha/

Very first thing that pop up in my eyes... I have to scroll sideways on the galleries at 1024x786 and that's an instant rejection alot of places.

I would do a bit more out of the advertisement on the index and main page since experience have shown that those pages generate far the most signups.

18 movies of 1mb+ is way to much IMO. Don't give away everything but give the surfer just enough to make him whip out that CC. 120 seconds should be enough but make sure that it's 120 seconds movies and not 110 sec. movies and 10 sec sponsor promo - some take those last 2-3 seconds away.

I'm in the midst of doing reviews right now anyway...will slide one in here for ya :)

Warning page...

Slight side scroll at 800 px wide, these days some decline for it, some don't. Greenie shoke things up a while back and changed his rules to 1024 wide, so many have relaxed a bit on the 800 wide.

Your free site can't have the same title or nearly the same title as the paysite you're promoting. That's an instant decline with most reviewers.

I agree with Beenie, in that you could make your paysite links a more prominent on the warning page.

Main page...

Plain, simple and clean. No real problems here, but again you could make the ads more enticing.

Galleries...

Definitely fix the side scroll...that will cause declines with a lot of reviewers with it scrolling at 1024 wide.

You do have a little more content than you need, though not a ton. As long as you've got at least 120 secs, you're good to go. There are a handful of sites that'll give you a little bump in their rankings if your site warrants. Sometimes a little extra content doesn't hurt with that...but don't go over the top with content either. There are those (myself included), that will decline for too much content.

That's a pretty good first pass, with some minor tweaks...you're good to go |thumb

Big thanks!

Other reviews or comments?

I ditto MrYum's comments for he is very helpful with the info.

Your title tag and graphic for the site name states the sponsor which is a problem as stated above. Turn your graphic into your own banner by making it a link. Above that give your site a descript 3 word name like, Big Black Bottoms. Throw that name into your title tag as well that will help a bit with some search engines.

Your galleries are 2 rows of 3 so change them to 3 rows of 2. You may want to reduce the quality of those thumbed links with no problems. At nearly 40k each it can make the page load a bit slow for some.

Other than that I would list it.

Also i would recommend to add more sales text on your main and gallery pages.. it seems so empty.. ;)