what I have sofar minus a warning page
 

Well this is what I have so far as you can tell its kinda plain not great on verbage,but I think that comes in time.Or is it too plain

http://www.tinysplace.com/free/chubby/brandi/main.html

Tiny, The basics are there :)

Some of the text is a bit hard to read... - try playing with the BG colour and the TEXT colour

Some of the text needs centering too.

The bottom banner on - http://www.tinysplace.com/free/chubby/brandi/gal1.html - looks like it is built for a WHITE background. ? and therefore looks a bit tacky..

Same on the second gallery..

Yep - you need more text..

It's a decent start.. and I have seen worse submitted;(

DD

Ditto what DD said.

If it were me I would make the linked text purple so that it jumps out at surfer. Non-linked text I would make black. You do need to use more non-linked text to tease the surfer into clicking the links. IMHO

type style
 

hey tiny,
what type style are you using? been trying to find that style to use on some of my sites.

Tiny,

Your site is clean and simple - too simple... Make sure you use text under or above banners - it really helps with conversions!

Also, you might try advertising more than one affiliate site per page - more bang for the buck!

I'd like to see better quality compression on the images. I can't tell if you've run a filter on the images or they are just compressed at a low quality rate.

This girl looks like she has great skin, but the quality is lost through the compression artifacting around her eyes and mouth.... just my $0.02 worth.

The skin definately looks filtered, almost like "auto levels" was ran in photoshop a few too many times