Round 2: How are the revised freesites
 

Okay so we've taken your advice on that last batch of freesites and here's round 2, would these get listed:

http://kbprod.com/vince/March12/1/
http://kbprod.com/vince/March12/2/
http://kbprod.com/vince/March12/3/

http://kbprod.com/vince/March13/1/
http://kbprod.com/vince/March13/2/
http://kbprod.com/vince/March13/3/

Please be honest (and constructive)

Much better.

I am no expert and I don't have the experience to give advice, but I will say that they look quite a bit better than the previous sites. I see titles and more nudity. Also they are different enough from one another as not to look like the same template over and over. Anyway, I like them and I would use them on my hub.|thumb

Thirded |thumb

It´s a work of art!

They're pretty good and I'll use them, but the titles don't really grab me.
"My Red Dress", "My Black Bikini", if I put them in my kinky cat with those titles nobody will know what the fetish is.
I can always change that though, put the title as "My Smoking Red Dress" or "Smoking Hot Black Bikini". I don't use descriptions on my LL so I'm a little, or maybe a lot different |loony|

Nice designs though, and I'll use them.

I was gonna mention that, but I was happy that Kenny got them to not have the girls name :D

Yes, the titles could have more references to the content - smoking, smoke, puff, cigs, etc - just don't go nuts & title 5 of them "Smoking....." because I know when I go to a Link List & the sites are listed in alphabetical order, if I see a lot of sites on the same domain with the same 1st word in the title, I tend to skip past them.

This is where you could actually use the model's name.
Claire Has A Puff
Hot Monica Really Is Smoking
Naked Janet Enjoys A Menthol
etc.

Thanks for your time guys it's appreciated and we will be applying this to all new freesites.

Those look much better. I'll be adding them to my sites.

Thanks Kenny B for listening to LL owners and being open to changing/fixing problems with your hfs. Much appreciated. |thumb

Those are some great freesites! I like the design very much, you are talented!

Now you're getting close to where I would use them. I do not have the time to tweak them myself these days unfortunately.

Keep it up and you'll get there soon for those like me :)

Thanks, I'll post another batch soon just to make sure we're still on the right track!