can you look on my sites?
 

hi everybody,im newbie here and in this biz , can you look on my sites?
and give me any pointers |bow|
http://www.clitpass.com/sites/SuperS.../ap/index.html
http://www.clitpass.com/sites/HornyA.../ap/index.html
thx for looking and any word from you

also have question i dont know why quantumporn ,click4sexfun and smutrat they put me on their blacklist dont know why and dont know what i should do?
help and advice needed

http://www.clitpass.com/sites/SuperS.../ap/index.html - I'm not a big fan of the background colors changing as you go from page to page (and it's making some of the text unreadable as it's color is not changing)

It looks like you're using the browser's default font as well - I've always been a fan of choosing a font so that everyone see the same thing.

The banner on the bottom of the main & 2nd gallery isn't a banner - looks like a slice from a gallery template. I'd try to find one that has some sales text on it.

The pics are a little too small for my site's rules.

Other than that, it's not a bad site - it just needs a little fine tuning.

In addition to what Greenie has mentioned, you are better off hosting your own 2257 info instead of linking out to the sponsors page. The one you are using has links to the sponsors sites.

You need more sales text. And make that text more prominent. Bump the font size a few points and you might use a color wheel to pick your colors. Doing so can help your text stand out from the rest of the page and draw your future customer$ attention. :)

wow thx very much for quick response didnt know that pics are to small
now i know thx again

Here's from the notes in my admin: "Doesn't respond when emailed about blind banners + very poor English."

I just got tired of declining your sites.

Same here. :( I always tell people why I'm rejecting their site. If they keep submitting with the same mistakes, I assume they don't care enough to read my decline emails and hit the blacklist button.

Guy's I didn't realize that for not responding to you or your rules you can blacklist me .
Belive me I care , my mistake .Im learning now and need little bit more practice obviously.
Thank You for understanding and your advices.

I did not blacklist you for not responding to emails. I blacklisted you because you kept submitting sites with the same mistakes I warned you about in my decline emails. If you've made a new site that follows the rules, PM me with the url and I'll take a look.