My next freesite
 

Hi . Can you guys look on my next freesite .
Any mistakes maybe ... just tell me |bow|
http://www.clitpass.com/sites/Beauti.../ap/index.html

I think your sponsor is using pop up windows. See if you have an option to disable them when you get your linking codes.

You have no meta tags, might be a good idea to read this post:
http://www.greenguysboard.com/board/...ight=meta+tags

I am sure you will get more advice, as I am no expert.

Looks good to me.

You might want to check spelling, though. Also check the LL rules you plan to submit to, for size of pictures (for example, link-o-rama rule 4).

pclit

Just a few points:

Warning Page: Your top banner and top text sponsor ad should be merged as one ad. This will give you another ad space to use.

Advertising text is more important than banners. A banner without text is a waste of space.

Main Page: This is your real 'hard-sell' page. At the moment you've got 3 sponsor ads but you could merge the right hand two and gain another at the bottom of the page.

Try to insert Keywords as in: Dildo Gallery One or Pussy Gallery 2.

Again on your Gallery pages you can squeeze out another ad on each page.

AS Johnnybg says, you'll definitely get refused by Greenie for small full size pics - should be 1200 height plus width.

Its a nice, simple clean design. Definitely on the right lines. :)

thank you for look
 

Thank you guys for closer look on my site.
Critic is always good even when is bad .|waves|

To add to what was already said, I'd reject the site for the banners on the index page that say "Enter Here". Just one of my pet peeves I guess but I only allow the word "Enter" once on the index page and that needs to go to the main page. Keep trying - you'll get there. :)

Thank you for good word i hope i'll get there

Your ads could use a lot of work, probably won't get many clicks, as they are not very exciting. No sense spending alot of time making and submitting sites if they don't get the clicks.