Some feedback for my Site
 

Hi everyone,

pls visit my new Site and give me some constructive critics
http://hot-teens.reanor.com/

Thanks
Sable

Just my first impressions are
- There are too many links on each page
- Not sure why you have two index pages with recips and if this would be allowed
- Keywords and description need to be swapped round
- Personally I would focus on selling just one site and get more text in there

A lot of link lists won't list sites on subdomains. Why not pony up 8 bucks and register a domain (or 10) to build your free sites on.

Your second set of LL recips on your main page is going to break the "3 outgoing links" rule that most LLs have. I don't have a 3 links rule. I just look at the site and if the ads overpower the content, I won't list it.

www.reanor.com is my domain, thought it would be better for SE's to build the sites on subdomains.

Would this be better:

reanor.com/hot-teens/
reanor.com/other-teens/

and so on?

Ok, i didn't realise that the recips on my second page would count as outgoing links, i will remove them for my next site.
Can't abandom them on this site cause i got listed in other LL's and i don't want to get blacklisted there :D

Sable

That is a better way. It is recognized by just about all LL's and will be easier for you to get listed as long as you are following their other rules.

Next try, are there still to many outgoing links?

http://www.reanor.com/teens/hot-teens/

Thanks

Sable

I count 5 outgoing links on the index so yeah, it still brakes the max 3 outg. links per page (most of LL have this rule)

on the second page you should have the links to the galleries. you could perfectly delete this page [http://www.reanor.com/teens/hot-teen...rs/index.html] and link the index directly to this one [http://www.reanor.com/teens/hot-teen.../gallery.html]

Weird, I need some clarification which links are counting as the outgoing links.

I have 3 links to sponsor
4 links to net nanny etc
1 leave the page link
2 links to 2257 (on my site)
1 link to linkspage (on my site)
1 link to impressum (on my site)

Would be great if someone can clear this.

The second page i build for the opportunity to display some more links to sponsor, but if this will me rejected on LL's i remove it.

TIA

Sable

The 3 to the sponsor are fine
The net nanny etc would get through most reviews but i have not seen them very often on free sites
Exit link is good
Two links to 2257 info is a bit over kill as most free sites do not require them (i think it is generally accepted that only one is required from the domain root)
The Links one will be the problem as it will be counted as another outgoing sales link
The impressum one again like 2257 i do not think this is required on a free site.
hope that helps

I have 89,000 links to sites that have an index page and a main page with a couple of link to gallery pages on it.

Personally, I fucking like that extra page. It's something different. Different is good.

The site looks fine to me. I'm listing it.

Thanks AndyS,

I have removed some of the links and reuploaded the site.

The impressum page is a special EU law, if some greedy lawyer finds out the domain is owned by a german i would be in hell with bills from him, so i leave it on the page.

2257 page is required by some LL's, so i have the link on the warning page too.

Moved the link to the links page to my second page. I'm in doubt if it makes sense SE wise, wanted to interlink all my sites there, but without subdomains does the links there count for link popularity?

@ spacemanspiff

Thank you :D

Sable

Two things that are on your site I get rejected for at the big LL's:

Banner on the top of every page says "enter here" and they don't like that, but usually "click here" is okay.

1200 rule, not all the pictures are 1200 or bigger.

And just a preference thing I would make the thumb pics of your girls on the index page the same size, one is 290 x 436 and the other is 290 x 387. The pics are also different sizes on http://www.reanor.com/teens/hot-teen...s/gallery.html.

Keep up the great work! :D