First site - What do you think?
 

Hello all. I'm a new bbw web girl and am wanting some feedback on my site. Be harsh if needed!!

Thanks,

Hailey

http://www.haileybbw.com

the warning page is messed up in firefox. loaded ok in IE.

http://www.misterspunky.com/hailey-bbw-screenshot.jpg

the design is a little graphic heavy for my tastes, and thats also going to hurt you in the search engines. overall it looks good.

same as beaver bob, in firefox, the warning page is pretty messed up.

I do like the design though. Simple and catchy. nicely done!

The spelling of legal on your warning is incorrect. You need to jack-up the tour.

Hey Haileybbw,

I like the background and I think you are off to a good start. I do have just a few suggestions as I work with CCBill programs every day.

First, I have to get to the third page to see your sales pitch. I understand having the warning page, but that should enter to your main tour page.

Second, on the tour page, you need more pics and more tease either through text or pics. Make sure everyone knows how awesome the Member's Area and what the surfer gets for his money. Things like "hundreds of pics!" "hundreds of exclusive videos!" "Cam sessions!" "I answer all email!" things like that help in the sales pitch as much as good images.

Third, I like having the CCBill logo on this page as this is a very trusted and recognized processor that surfers recognize, but that is not linked to the join page. When in doubt I try to link everything to the join page.

I hope you do very well and I wish you a lot of luck!

Matt

thank you for writing back. the first three have already been fixed!! thanks for letting me know!!

and matt, thanks for your information. i have let my wm know and she is looking into changing some more things!!

thanks guys for being so helpful!!!!!