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lazzlo 2008-07-21 10:40 AM

2nd freesite review please
 
I still have to change the recips, but you get the idea. It's for category uniform or stockings, any input before I fire it off is much appreciated! thanks again GG crew.....
http://justsheer.com/striptease/index.html

Tekster 2008-07-21 10:48 AM

Enter Only Tease on the main page might be considered blind by some LL, and check your 2257 links. Otherwise I think it looks pretty good.

lazzlo 2008-07-21 11:01 AM

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Originally Posted by TekAngel (Post 410731)
Enter Only Tease on the main page might be considered blind by some LL, and check your 2257 links. Otherwise I think it looks pretty good.

doh they moved their 2257 page, will fix that thanks! as for "Enter Only Tease" the paysite is onlytease, is "enter" no good on freesites? what do i say, "This way to Only tease" "See more at Only tease" how do i get them to enter if i cant say enter? Thanks for the help :)

hashbury 2008-07-21 11:16 AM

ENTER is one of those words that can tend to trick the surfer. I really never use the word enter on my warning page accept to link to the main page. You can use click here for only tease or use your text. Since only tease is the site name you could probally use Enter Only Tease on your other pages.

LD 2008-07-21 11:19 AM

Those galleries seem a little short on nudity. We don't even see boobs until the last two or three pics. Might not be dirty enough for some sites. The "enter only tease" wordage is fucking with my brain somehow...I don't know, technically OK I guess but maybe something like ENTER: "onlytease.com" would be more meaningful.

Good looking site, overall.

lazzlo 2008-07-21 11:22 AM

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Originally Posted by hashbury (Post 410741)
ENTER is one of those words that can tend to trick the surfer. I really never use the word enter on my warning page accept to link to the main page. You can use click here for only tease or use your text. Since only tease is the site name you could probally use Enter Only Tease on your other pages.

ok thanks, i only have "enter" once on the index, thats to go to the main. so i guess the "enter" on the main is no good, ok I'll change it right away.

lazzlo 2008-07-21 11:23 AM

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Originally Posted by LusciousDelight (Post 410745)
Those galleries seem a little short on nudity. We don't even see boobs until the last two or three pics. Might not be dirty enough for some sites. The "enter only tease" wordage is fucking with my brain somehow...I don't know, technically OK I guess but maybe something like ENTER: "onlytease.com" would be more meaningful.

Good looking site, overall.

thanks. its a uniform niche freesite so i think surfers like the uniforms on abit more than usual. I'll just get rid of the "enter" on all the pages.

Licker4U 2008-07-21 11:25 AM

Since "Enter Only Tease" is on the main page and not on the index page it should be OK. It's not blind because it gives the name of the site the surfer is going to. As already stated, the word "Enter" on the index page should be there only once, which goes to your main page. Only problem I see is that Best Wet Pussy isn't in the recip table......:D

hashbury 2008-07-21 11:26 AM

I was thinking you would be submitting to the lingerie cat. where you dont need full nudity. Any other categories you might have a problem with non nudity.

lazzlo 2008-07-21 11:27 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LusciousDelight (Post 410745)
Those galleries seem a little short on nudity. We don't even see boobs until the last two or three pics. Might not be dirty enough for some sites. The "enter only tease" wordage is fucking with my brain somehow...I don't know, technically OK I guess but maybe something like ENTER: "onlytease.com" would be more meaningful.

Good looking site, overall.

ok, i changed "Enter Only Tease" text links to "Click Here for Only tease". I don't really wanna put a .com on my text, im not a fan of type ins.

Licker4U 2008-07-21 11:29 AM

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Originally Posted by LusciousDelight (Post 410745)
Those galleries seem a little short on nudity. We don't even see boobs until the last two or three pics. Might not be dirty enough for some sites.

Just my opinion but I disagree. It's promoting a tease site so a lot of nudity isn't required, imho. Surfers might be more inclined to click over to the tour hoping to see more and if they don't get more on the tour they may pay for the opportunity to see more. Just my .02

lazzlo 2008-07-21 11:29 AM

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Originally Posted by Licker4U (Post 410753)
Since "Enter Only Tease" is on the main page and not on the index page it should be OK. It's not blind because it gives the name of the site the surfer is going to. As already stated, the word "Enter" on the index page should be there only once, which goes to your main page. Only problem I see is that Best Wet Pussy isn't in the recip table......:D

thats what i thought but the word "enter" kept arising here, so i just swapped it, no biggie. thanks for your input. :)

lazzlo 2008-07-21 11:32 AM

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Originally Posted by hashbury (Post 410754)
I was thinking you would be submitting to the lingerie cat. where you dont need full nudity. Any other categories you might have a problem with non nudity.

i think it will be ok, uniform, stockings, lingerie categories. i do alot of tgp subbing as well and they get listed no sweat, if the webmaster doesnt wanna list it, ah well, on to the next one. i can see not listed in babe or big tits, but its a pretty niche specific gallery.

hashbury 2008-07-21 11:41 AM

You could also start using text recips for any of your upcoming freesites. Although, its not required at all, I think it gives the site a more professional look.
I think your on a great start, probally a lot better than the rest of us started. Now the only thing you need to do, is build, build, and build.

lazzlo 2008-07-21 12:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by hashbury (Post 410759)
You could also start using text recips for any of your upcoming freesites. Although, its not required at all, I think it gives the site a more professional look.
I think your on a great start, probally a lot better than the rest of us started. Now the only thing you need to do, is build, build, and build.

sounds good and thanks for the help. can i see an example of this? i put a text recip where? on my main? index? to upcoming freesite? so i guess i gotta be one ahead of them?

annie_cash 2008-07-21 01:08 PM

It looks fine, I would olny make the Enter on the index page a little bigger, or move it in a way in doesnt end up on the very bottom of the page. It maight look kinda hidden for some link lists.

Useless 2008-07-21 03:46 PM

Many places will count that 2257 link as one of your 3 links and reject you for for being over 3. I'm not overly sensitive about the number of links out, BUT I'd reject it since 2257 pages shouldn't have anything except legal info on them, not join and tour links like that one. Either drop the link or copy their legal info on to your site.

Lemmy 2008-07-21 10:43 PM

The 3rd thumb in the bottom row on gallery 1 is linked to the wrong pic. Site looks nice.

lazzlo 2008-07-21 11:54 PM

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Originally Posted by Useless Warrior (Post 410794)
Many places will count that 2257 link as one of your 3 links and reject you for for being over 3. I'm not overly sensitive about the number of links out, BUT I'd reject it since 2257 pages shouldn't have anything except legal info on them, not join and tour links like that one. Either drop the link or copy their legal info on to your site.

thats a good point, they changed the page to that recently and am going to ask them to put it on a single page, thanks

lazzlo 2008-07-22 12:00 AM

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Originally Posted by Lemmy (Post 410825)
The 3rd thumb in the bottom row on gallery 1 is linked to the wrong pic. Site looks nice.

doh, that was bonehead of me, thanks alot for pointing that out. you guys are great!

spacemanspiff 2008-07-22 08:17 AM

I'm not very picky about any of that stuff. "Enter" in the affiliate link, ads on 2257, etc. If the site has some nice pics/vids that my surfers will enjoy, has a reasonable number of ads, and the links to sponsors aren't BLATANTLY deceptive, I'll list it.

lazzlo 2008-07-22 06:23 PM

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Originally Posted by spacemanspiff (Post 410864)
I'm not very picky about any of that stuff. "Enter" in the affiliate link, ads on 2257, etc. If the site has some nice pics/vids that my surfers will enjoy, has a reasonable number of ads, and the links to sponsors aren't BLATANTLY deceptive, I'll list it.

you made the 20th reply on my 1st one too. |waves|

spacemanspiff 2008-07-23 06:53 PM

Ahhh,.... I did that on purpose. Yeah.....that's the ticket. |thumb

smutguy 2008-07-23 07:28 PM

Good to see you getting advice over here lazzlo

keep up the good work on your freesites

btw you have a PM

lazzlo 2008-07-24 07:47 AM

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Originally Posted by smutguy (Post 411119)
Good to see you getting advice over here lazzlo

keep up the good work on your freesites

btw you have a PM

|bananna|


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