3rd and final review pleasey
 

Thanks guys, I really really really appreciate all your help! I just wanna make sure I have this down pat so you list them. last time I'll bug you about them, promise! I still have to do the recip table along with any changes you guys want. Any changes need to be made?
http://www.browselingerie.com/yurizan/index.html

That girl is too hot for a freesite :)
I think you've got it pretty much down.

Although some anal reviewers might take offense on that "Click here" on your very first banner but I wouldn't worry about it.
Submit it and go fishing :)

all the banners in the webmaster tools have click here on them :(

The site looks good and I would list it but if your concerned, you could do a title tag for the banners saying "click here to visit the main tour". That takes care of the issue of having click here on the banner itself, which could be regarded as misleading.

I would also suggest you put something on the index page of your domain too |thumb

ok thanks, i will do the tag, and i was going to do that index before subbing :) these freesites are a great way to utilize domains i have laying around.

Check out the background color of both galleries; it's different from the color on the index and main page. Some link list won't like that because it might look like those pages aren't part of the same freesite. Try to keep the same design for the whole site. And always try to change your templates so they dont look all the same (you can repeat templates over a months or so)

Other than that, and what Fonz and Bluebrit said before, I think it looks fine |thumb

I dunno if I added the tags right? i added some tho.

thanks annie, i was trying to change the gallerys cause i was told it was good too. i matched the backgrounds to the lingerie yuri is wearing in the sets. if enough say all pages have to be the same colour, i'll change it. thanks again for your help :)

You did not have to use the exact text "click here to visit the main tour", which does work on your banners by the way.

You could just as easily spice it up by saying "Click here to view the main tour and see even more photos of the sexy girl featured on this freesite".

Anything you can add to your FS to bring in more people is always going to be better for you.

thanks for the tip!

im glad i posted, thx again annie, all pages have the same color now :)

Looking good lazz. You have come a long way in such a short time... :)

Oh and welcome to GGnJ btw |thumb

Only problem I can find is it doesn't have my recip:D

:D

Yeah, that is a big problem. |haha

Mine isn't there either |cry|

get u all on the next jobby thanks guys!