Please review my newbie “state of the art” site
 

Hello everybody

After a carefull study of all the nice comments I received from my last request review experience here, and some more expertise acquired, here I am again with what I think may be considered a newbie “state of the art” site.

If you people think this is a “winning” site design, in terms of selling, then I will proceed into paid hosting and start promoting.

To be perfectly clear, I am trying to sell both sponsor and my own platinum CyberAge site.

If you care to do it, would also love to hear some comments on SEs optimization used.

All contributions will be welcome and much appreciated, specially from those of you who run the great LLs, DIRs, etc we all depend on for traffic

http://femdom.goodgallerys.com/trample/domina/index.htm

Thanks in advance

Bert

Your not gonna do much on a freehost :(

Your warning is way too big.

Banners without attached linked text repel sales.

Your text, that stuff on the main page, is better than a lot I've seen, but not good enough. Keep reworking it.

8 pics per gallery? won't get accepted. 4 gallerys? Arguably too many pics overall.

Your content is okay, some small problems, and the big SCORPIO text that isn't clearly a copyright will not get accepted in some places.

You've got the right general idea, just needs more work. Then get a real host.

bert2000pt - aside from what Bill said, the quality of the thumbs & the pics is less then decent.

MML - he siad he was going to get a paid host :)

Thanks Bill and Greenguy

BILL
text on banner - good tip !!!
about the 4 galleries. I did it that way in order to have the pictures grouped in a logical way.
Gals 1 and 2, same scene, 8 pics each
gals 3 and 4, different scenes, 8 pics on gal 3, 6 on gal 4
total pics on site - 30

Is it better to have 3 galleries of 10 pics each, despite the content not being grouped ?

The Scorpio text
I use it so my pics can't be stollen and used on other sites.
Can you please tell me a better way of marking my pics?

GREENGUY
You say quality of thumbs and pics is "less than decent".
Am I using to much compression or are you speaking of the actual picture content?

Sorry to be "a pain in the ass" but I do value your comments.

Thanks

Bert

Too Much compression on the pics & thumbs.