Can I get some feedback on a tour?
 

I just posted a new Web tour for one of my my mobile adult sites:

http://www.upandcummingmobile.com

I hope to launch a Web adult affiliate program with this and a half dozen other mobile niche sites soon. I also have TGP, banners, etc.

Right now I'd love any feedback or constructive criticism on this tour.

Thanks a million in advance. :)

Jeff

Nice graphics but the tour itself is really kind of plain. There are no good explanation or samples of what they will get if they join. Info on movies or info on scenes they can expect and things like that.

Regarding samples
 

Regarding samples: do you recommend just sample images? Or maybe animated images? Or maybe short embedded flash vids on a sample phone image? I hate to give away too much, how much is smartest?

a short 30sec trailer and a couple picture samples would be helpful I think.

Like Ramster said, its not really clear what you get when you sign up.

It seems very general and you would probably do better with it if you niched things out.

IMO a short and memorable domain name is always a plus, but especially important if you are specifically targeting mobile users.

Samples in general. Here is a sample of what you get. Like Bob said, a 30 second clip or 2, some sample images and things. If people join they want to know what they get exactly.

InfoGuy, a domain name is nice but it really doesn't matter that much.

Domain names
 

Because the actual site is for mobile, users don't return by type-in on their desktop - so I'm not super concerned about the domain.

As for niche, I have a series of niched out mobile sites that I sell currently to mobile users. I will also build web tours for them soon. (perticularly if I can get more people interested in promoting this).

For this site (which is kind of my beta launch for Web sales) I'm considering "mobile" to essentially BE the niche. The content is admittedly very generic.

I'm still seeing pretty good test conversions with well qualified traffic (1:470). I think a lot of it is the curiosity factor - which could last for quite a while.

I get the message that I don't describe or (even more importantly) display enough of the product in this tour.

Thanks big time you guys!

The promo looks pretty old skool to me. I would use more CSS and less photoshop for the layout, and as already stated some 30 second trailers would be useful.