Please critique my site
 

http://liquid4play.com

I did a site years ago and am getting back into it after several years of non adult webpages I am trying to create a new one, please take a look at my site and let me know what you think. I have submitted to greenguy and tommy but no have gotten nothing let me know what I can do.

Thanks All

Mark

Damn nice site. Only thing I'd do is put some ads on the front page and down the sides. I hate to see all that nice space go to waste.

Thanks for looking at it I will be making more changes soon.

Hi liquid4play.

your site desing looks nice when it comes 2 design. BUT what kind of site are you building???

I am building a site of pornstar galleries and some movie content. I am putting in an avs section for hardcore pics and movies

Hmmmm dont want 2 be rout(dont know how new you are) but do you know what a freesite is? If not you need 2 do some studing. I dont think this site will be listed very many places.
Also be sure 2 carefuly read the rules of the lists you submit 2!

I dont have time right now, but surf this board. There is tons of good info. Also see this link for some info on freesites
http://www.cozyacademy.com/classroom...site/index.asp

Thanks for criticism, but I dont see how this is not following submitting rules and why this is not a considered a free site, Im not submitting the indexpage Im submitting the individual galleries.

liquid4play If we assume that this is a free site.

1) You have FAR 2 much content.

2) You chould not change the site after its added(adding more banners...)

3) you have more than 3 sponser/promo links/banners on your main page.

As for as FreeSites go, you chould use your domain 2 build many sites(using directories) http://liquid4play.com/freesite1/ - http://liquid4play.com/freesite2/ .......

Dont know if this helps.

Oh that was not clear to me!! Sorry then I have totaly misunderstood you! ...
Well I dont know much about building galleries and TGPs......

Thanks for advice I will make changes to make it more suitable for submitting, I will make individual pages more clear and links to sponsors more prominent and hopefully converting.


Thankyou