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TrainWreckContent 2011-04-05 12:25 PM

feedback on my new design for expresswritersonline
 
I would like some feedback on my new site www.expresswritersonline.com. I have redone the site in word press and gotten rid of the flash site we were using. We still need to update the text on the site but i am looking for feedback on the design? Any input is greatly appricated!!

Voltar 2011-04-05 01:52 PM

simple and clean looking...
not as fast loading as it could be(but not a slow turd either), but the head tag is just stuffed like a thanksgiving day turkey with stuff isn't it... that whole page could be done alot lighter in a pure html and one animated gif, if you are loking at that aspect of it..and you need some SEO work done on it...i know you mentioned you have to update the text..but make sure you tell them why you are there and where your animated quotes come from..they sort of hang there making you wonder if they are made up or not..
there you go...you asked

TrainWreckContent 2011-04-07 09:49 PM

I finally got the text updated. Let me know what you think.


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