What can i do to make this free site better!?
 

So what do you think about my work !?. :)

http://www.pornww.com/freepornsites/...r/7/index.html


bad stuff and good stuff!
out with it peeps! |waves|

You can hire us to make a better design for your site |rasta|

other then that |rasta|

welcum aboard by the way! |waves|

That's a really helpful first post then.

That site looks nice and clean to me, you might want to add some catchy sales text to it....

Oh yeah, I rejected your last submission because that template was submitted 4-5 times in the last few days, sorry :)

See, that question was best answered by a link list owner. :)

Ya don't need photoshop to add catchy text.

The overall design of the site looks fine - you could probably even do a little more advertising on the main page (it looks sorta empty)

Your selling is way too passive. I can't see a single reason why someone should buy off your site.

Other than that it's fine, as long as you don't turn it into a repetitive template. It will at least get accepted most places, based on a quick overview.

But it's if anything too LL-friendly. Why throw away the sales potential you are allowed to use?

No problem dude i have been working on a few other designs now so ;)

Thanks for all the tips guys i will try to add some more links and tell more about the sites i promote! |shake|

|waves|

This was listed on Jays today - :)
I did change the category though -

I guess I'm a bit late to critic though.. LOL

No you can never be to late what can i do to improve ?! |rasta|