WOOHOO my first free site
 

Alrighty... lay it on me....

good? bad? try a new line of work?

I need a new banner there in the middle, I just had my buddy whip something up real quick. It will change once that sponsor get's some banners in there.

http://www.supertgps.com/free/0622/01-sc.html

These are just test recips that I've put up there. I actually haven't submitted anything yet.

Thanks for your time,

1. It would help a lot if you would put that logo that you have on your gallery pages on your index and main page also. Now it looks like those gallery pages are just 2 seperate Thumbnail pages put behind 2 other pages that were put together in 2 minutes.
2. Your main page is kind of empty. Try to put 2 really catchy text links on it and maybe a HPA above the gallery links.

Your index page is lil bit to wide.. probably you wouldn't get listed at big LL unless you change the width of your site. Site should be as narrow that 800*600 users are not forced to scrol the page horizontally - good idea is to put the table as base and work on it. As I remember GreenGuy said 780px would be enough, myself I always use 750px (however my latest site was rejected by Cleo with 'Page is too wide' reason anyway ) :)

Also the name of the site should be visible at index page - if '100% Amateur Cuties' is the name, probably it would be hard to get listed with such photos - amateurs category is flooded with submissions and amateurs should be really amateurs to get listed... '100% Softcore Cuties' would be a good name for this site I guess, but the name must appear at index page and not only main page

Good advice so far :)

Adding the logo to the index and and main page will "pretty" the site up but not overly needed. However some added text will make the site nicer. Also I'd add more text about the sponsor on those pages trying to get some clickthrus from there rather than just the gallery pages.

Otherwise it is following all the rules and should get listed. The only problem being as stated the index and main do not flow all that good with the gallery pages.

Yeah, the naming scheme is all over the place.
Index - 100% Amateur Cuties
Main - 100%Softcore Cuties (But the gallery links say 'Amateur Cutie')
Galleries - No real title, but the big banner is for Softcore Cuties, which is the sponsor. It is placed in a way that makes it look like it is the free site's title. I may be wrong, but many would definately advise against naming your free site the same as a sponsor site.

I'd knock that recip table down to three columns wide and bring the other recips down on a third row. This would make it fit on my screen. I build all of my sites at 800x600 and then test them at a higher resolution to see if everything stays centered.

Someone else brought the fact that some may not consider this babe as 'Amateur'. Here is my rule for determining whether a hottie is amateur enough to be submitted to the amateur category. If I was to walk by her in a bar, would she laugh at me? If yes, she's too pretty. If no, she's an amateur.

(Truthfully though, my wife laughs at me when I walk by her.)

hehe

alrighty.. cool.. Thanks guys, I'm gonna take all tips and suggestions and modify the site. But maybe not today. I haven't slept yet and my brain seems to off right now.

Thanks a lot and I'll be back soon.

TAKE 2
 

http://www.supertgps.com/free/0629/

The gallery pages will have some copy in them and such.

Fixed the recip table. No left to right scrolling in 800x600 resolution. changed the gallery look so it would meld a little better with the other pages.

Added some copy, but still need to fill in some more. you'll see where.


Tell me if somethings wrong or if i'm on the right track and I just need to make it look pretty now.

Thanks again,

Submit it.... we'll approve it |shake|

(you should post your 2257 info)