I have some general advice after reviewing all three of them.
Galleries don't require titles, so you can and should drop them. That space is better used for a graphic header ad.
You need to really work on your descriptions. They must describe the content seen on the gallery, not background story. Descriptions should always be in third person, not first. You'll find some places will only give you 17 characters for a description and some will give you 35-75. Have a few versions of varying lengths prepared.
Drop those table borders. They look very 90's.
You have some nice big pics, as large as 1200px, but they are getting just a bit grainy. Optimize them down to 600-800 px on the long side and keep them clear. Clear is a better than big, unless it's a cock, in which case bigger is better.
Don't use the word 'more' in links. That will get you rejected a many places. Also, don't use questions that can be answered with 'no' in your supporting text. Tell the surfers what they want, don't ask them.