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Old 2004-12-13, 09:56 PM   #2
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By just looking at the site I got from you today, I'd say that you need to be more in the FACE and sell more.

"Click here to get full access to all our lesbian pics & movies" - in font size small, doesn't cut it.

All your links to the sponsor are small, very small. Nothing sticks out. And the scrolling thing.... drop it
Read some of AlphaWolf's posts or/and get some of these books to get some ideas:

Copywriting
By Gabay, Jonathan
ISBN 0340867280

The Copywriter's Handbook: A Step-By-Step Guide to Writing That Sells. Updated Edition
By Bly, Robert W.
ISBN 0805011943


Good luck
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