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Bake, jumping around folders is a sign that you didn't build a site, just a page. It isn't hard to just copy the html over and keep the entire site in one place.
As for the wording, well, copying right from a site isn't always the best way to go. Taken out of context, it is a meanless line of gibberish. Even in context, it is a fairly weak bit of text.
You have no masturbation or toys on your free site, so your sales pitch really doesn't match the type of traffic your site would generate.
Alex
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