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Originally Posted by twan
Is it a bit better now?  |
Sort of.
You still need more recips, 9-12 seems to be the happy medium that most FS builders go with.
Regarding ads: No need to rely too heavily on sponsor banners. Mix it up with some juicy linked text of your own.
Main page: Why the linked picture to gallery #1? While it doesn't link to anything illegal it doesn't say where it's taking the surfer and would be considered blind by some reviewers.
Also, I would clearly mark the gallery links as "Gallery link 1" and "Gallery link 2" to avoid any confusion. Some FS builders like to make enter/gallery links small and hard to find to make the surfer hunt for them, the logic being they get exposed to more ads. My own philosophy is if the surfer doesn't find what he's looking for right away they'll just click out of your site. In other words, make clear, easy-to-find enter/gallery links. This will also make it easier to get accepted at the LLs.
Gallery #1: Your HTML seems to be screwed up + you still need more content.
General tip for the whole site: Until you're more comfortable with HTML and building sites, don't try anything too fancy. Simple goes a long way.
Final tip: Use a mouseover code to hide your affiliate code from the status bar. Some surfers are weary of clicking if the address is too funny-looking. Just make sure that the destination URL is always visible.